Reviews

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notes:

"Handing them off to Kenneth was my only choice. They’ll be able to relate to him the most. He is like them." So Nigel only gave them to Kenneth because they could relate to him? What about healing Lizzie? Does he have some sort of Doctor's degree that no one cared to mention? What if he has no idea how to help them and all Nigel cares about is whether or not they could relate to each other?

Why was Nigel so scared of running away when he actually, but only know decides he needs to run away?

"I ring the bell on the door that signals for Icarus." ha, so the slave has his own slave!

"I switch the bag into my hands and take off running." A few chapters ago, he couldn't even walk up a flight of stairs without panting like a mule with asthma.