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message 1: by smile (new)

smile even when you can’t (smileyfox) | 129 comments Ok, so what did you guys think? Any comments / concerns / suggestions / edits / ideas / etc? How can we make it better?


message 2: by Aҽɾιαʅ (new)

Aҽɾιαʅ Dყɳαɱιƈ (fairiefox14) review:

¨We all gasp as the powers that are torturing us fade away.¨ Shorten it to ´We all gasp as the torturing powers fade away.´ or something like that.

During this process, does she feel something inside her snap? Is there a sudden emptiness she didnt know was previously filled?

Why is she so sad to see her powers go? Wouldn´t she still have PTSD from murdering her whole family? Why isn´t she in the least bit scared of hers powers?

didn they know about both her powers before?

The cliff-hanger ended at a point wee already discussed. Lizzie told them that she had two powers before, why s it so surprising now?


message 3: by smile (new)

smile even when you can’t (smileyfox) | 129 comments Why thank you! XD


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