Beta Readers needed for short story psychological.

[Preston]

Hello, I am seeking a couple Beta's for a quick, easy read. It's a psychological/slightly dark, disturbing short story intended for a horror podcast. It is just under 6,000 words.

I've written a short synopsis below:

Benjamin Grim is a celebrated computer security expert gone mad. His latest pet project, coined Charly, is a computer program capable of taking anyone's photo and turning it into realistic graphic violence, sex, pretty much anything you can think of. Charly can also recognize anyone's deepest desires and turn it into authentic-looking video. Benjamin's madness has also deviated into a detestable lust for a young girl.


I am looking for grammar, punctuation and any blatant errors that pop out. Please be forewarned the short story is slightly disturbing but nothing overly graphic or violent.

Let me know if you are interested, thank you.

[Dave]

I'm all-in. I'm a college instructor in critical thinking and work more than 20 hours per week with a group of college athletes on GRAMMAR!!!! dave_laxton@yahoo.com