This is my first time looking for Beta readers, better late than never. I have a completed novel that needs help! I am looking for constructive criticism and opinions on plot, structure, voice, etc.
My story takes place in Medieval Ireland, and is approximately 82,000 words. Here's a summary.
Having spent her life accused of being a changeling and a witch, Aurnia O’Brien knows fear. Fortunately, thanks to her family, she also knows love and will not accept an arranged marriage without it, unlike her younger sister. So when Aurnia’s visions shift from friends and family to that of a handsome knight, she flees the safety of her family home for the solitude of the Burren, only to find she hasn’t escaped the man of her visions, but intrigued him. Roger de Gernon has strong beliefs and an even stronger faith. As one of Henry II’s most trusted knights, he has been sent to Ireland to bring them under control. He offers support for his friend’s arranged marriage. Captivated by the bride’s sister he is pulled into a journey of magicks and Fae. Aurnia and Roger will have to learn to trust one another while fighting their growing attraction on a journey that will test both their faiths.
I have a completed novel that needs help! I am looking for constructive criticism and opinions on plot, structure, voice, etc.
My story takes place in Medieval Ireland, and is approximately 82,000 words. Here's a summary.
Having spent her life accused of being a changeling and a witch, Aurnia O’Brien knows fear. Fortunately, thanks to her family, she also knows love and will not accept an arranged marriage without it, unlike her younger sister. So when Aurnia’s visions shift from friends and family to that of a handsome knight, she flees the safety of her family home for the solitude of the Burren, only to find she hasn’t escaped the man of her visions, but intrigued him. Roger de Gernon has strong beliefs and an even stronger faith. As one of Henry II’s most trusted knights, he has been sent to Ireland to bring them under control. He offers support for his friend’s arranged marriage. Captivated by the bride’s sister he is pulled into a journey of magicks and Fae. Aurnia and Roger will have to learn to trust one another while fighting their growing attraction on a journey that will test both their faiths.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Lisa