Free IR Book for Feedback, Review & Reciprocity

[LI]

Hello everyone, I am looking for constructive feedback and perhaps a review of my new book - Dealing for a Kiss. It's a novella - A quick read.

The first part of the book is published on Inkitt:

https://www.inkitt.com/stories/romanc...

The second part of the book will be published in a few days.

I would be happy to reciprocate for authors who require feedback on their work.

I will release the final part of the book next month.

Thank you for your help!
Cheers

[Angel]

When I clicked on your link, it showed an error 404.

[Layeshia]

Sorry there was an error.

[LI]

Angel wrote: "When I clicked on your link, it showed an error 404."

Thanks Angel for letting me know. I've re-posted the link. I clicked on it with no issues. Let me know if you have any further problems with the link.
Cheers.

[LI]

Layeshia wrote: "Sorry there was an error."

Thanks for letting me know. I've re-posted the link. It should work fine now. Let me know if you have any further problems with it.

Cheers.

[LI]

I've just published the second part of Dealing for A Kiss on Inkitt.

https://www.inkitt.com/stories/romanc...

The third and final part of the book will be published in early February 2020.

Please let me know if you would like me to read and give you feedback on your work.
Thank you.

[LI]

https://www.inkitt.com/stories/romanc...

As promised last month, I've just published the third and final part of the book - Dealing for a Kiss. The book will remain published on Inkitt until February 29, 2020. I appreciate any constructive feedback and reviews. Enjoy and thank you for your time!

[Jmelfi]

I could only read 1 page before receiving a 404 oops! message. The page is gone. This happened twice after hitting the link buttons. Please fix this glitch. Thanks!

[LI]

Jmelfi wrote: "I could only read 1 page before receiving a 404 oops! message. The page is gone. This happened twice after hitting the link buttons. Please fix this glitch. Thanks!"

Hello @Jmelfi,
Thank you for your interest in the book. Sorry, you're having trouble accessing the content. I've followed the link and did not have any issues progressing through the chapters. I'm not sure why you are having this issue. Is anyone else having the same issues?

Thank you.

[LI]

Is anyone having trouble accessing or progressing through the chapters of DFAK using the Inkitt link provided?

https://www.inkitt.com/stories/romanc...

[LI]

Jmelfi wrote: "I could only read 1 page before receiving a 404 oops! message. The page is gone. This happened twice after hitting the link buttons. Please fix this glitch. Thanks!"

Jmelfi are you still getting the same error?

[Jmelfi]

No. I was able to read your story. It was interesting.

[LI]

Jmelfi wrote: "No. I was able to read your story. It was interesting."

Thank you for reading. If you have any constructive feedback, please feel free to give it. Cheers!

[LI]

If anyone is still interested in reading the book, you can access it only this month on either Inkitt:

https://www.inkitt.com/stories/romanc...

or on Wattpad:

https://www.wattpad.com/story/2137455...

Don't hesitate to provide feedback.
Thank you.