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Authors Seeking FREE Betas > Clean Regency Romance short story 8,000 words

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message 1: by Tammi (new)

Tammi Lee | 1 comments This short story is going to be a reader magnet. Felicity Wilson is beautiful, charming, and ready to find love when she heads to London for her season. She meets a handsome baronet and believes she's found her happily ever after.

Edward Pratt has no patience for beautiful creatures who say one thing and mean another. His friend has recently had a reversal of fortune and needs to break off his almost engagement with Felicity Wilson. Edward agrees to tell her the news and isn't surprised by her quick acceptance of the facts. When he breaks his leg and is forced to recuperate at her home will his opinion of her change?

I am looking for character development and pacing, editing will be done at a later date.

message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

Hi, how are you?
8,000 words? I would love to take a look.

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