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Lyrics Competitions > Lyric Contest #8: FEARS!

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message 1: by Maddie (new)

Maddie (mysteria02) | 133 comments This song is called, "A cry to follow."

I got a fear of falling
Till I land in your arms
I got a cry to follow
But every fear and every failure
Melts away from me
I got a prayer to say
But I know now more than ever
That nothing can compare to you

Hands hold the words we cannot say
Sometimes the silence
Breaks through the pain
Denying and hiding
Is not the way to live

I got a fear of falling
Till I land in your arms
I got a cry to follow
But every fear and every failure
Melts away from me
I got a prayer to say
But I know now more than ever
That nothing can compare to you

Praising your name
Is forever on my lips
Holding you close
Forever in my heart
You gave me mercy
When I did not deserve it
Your compassion overwhelms me

I got a fear of falling
Till I land in your arms
I got a cry to follow
But every fear and every failure
Melts away from me
In your arms
I got a prayer to say
But I know now and forever
Nothing can compare to you

Heart beats
And lives breat
Dreams align
And stories get told
Every song, every lyric
Is written for your glory
Would not have been possible
Without the life of your son
You cleansed and freed me
What can I say?

I got of fear of falling
Till I land in your arms
I got a cry to follow
But every fear and every failure
Melts away in your arms
I got a prayer to say
But I know now and forever
Nothing can compare to you

I got a fear of falling
And a cry to follow
But I know now and forever
Nothing compares to you


message 2: by Lana, Co-Owner: Lyricist Cookies Sunshine <3 (new)

Lana (ohmylily) | 298 comments Mod
Mmmm o-o This one's a toughie, Shine.
*rummages around 12 foot long stack of notebooks*
I'm sure I have one like this in here, if not, it's off to write.


message 3: by Laura-Lee (new)

Laura-Lee Rahn (lauraleewashere) | 92 comments Le'Kiss wrote: ""My greatest Fear"
by: Le'Kiss

It's easier to keep you at arm's length
because I don't have the strength
You're the one I trusted
You were my first defender
My Daddy and I was your Baby
Then y..."


Yes. It is very sad. Please don't delete it. LL


message 4: by Laura-Lee (new)

Laura-Lee Rahn (lauraleewashere) | 92 comments SHINE wrote: "In this contest, it would be about fears.
It can be overcoming or anything.
Just as long as it's clean."


I'm assuming the deadline is another Monday to Monday. ? LL


message 5: by Abbie (new)

Abbie (flying_high) Here’s my song ‘Holding On’:


message 6: by Abbie (new)

Abbie (flying_high) Here’s my song, ‘Holding On’:


It’s crawling
It’s coming
It’s taking over me

I try to stop
But I’m fighting just to breath

If only the pain, oh
Could take away my fate
If only the hurt, oh
Could chase the dark away

But I know
That he’s holding me
He loves me so much
He won’t let them take me
Away

I will live another day.

It’s hanging
It’s holding
Onto the smallest things

It’s trying
It’s remembering
That look on his face

When he told me
My story
With him has never been so sure

I’m stronger
Than this
I’m meant for so much more

Now I know the pain, oh
Will strengthen me today
I know the hurt
Will chase the dark away

And I know
Somewhere he’s for me
He loves me so much
He won’t let them take me
Away

I will live another day.


message 7: by Laura-Lee (new)

Laura-Lee Rahn (lauraleewashere) | 92 comments Who has your mind been? 😉

Life can be so difficult. SO MUCH going on at the same time. It IS hard to keep track of things and keep it together. You're doing great. Even all you do at these Groups takes up a big chunk of time. That's why I think taking a "Day of Rest” is still so incredibly important. God is so wonderful. So many people think of Him like a big Dictator in the sky. But His rules (Commandments) are all about His love for US. HE FORCES us to rest. How great He is? And I always feel better when I do it more HIS way than MINE.

Love LL


message 8: by Lana, Co-Owner: Lyricist Cookies Sunshine <3 (new)

Lana (ohmylily) | 298 comments Mod
Ooh, Shine please can you pleeeeeeeease hold this off until noon? I am SOO busy but I still have to enter but I have so much stuff to do but I KNOW I can write one before noon today? PLEASE.


message 9: by Faith (new)

Faith (victorianprincess) | 120 comments For me, too, please?!


message 10: by Faith (new)

Faith (victorianprincess) | 120 comments Shadows flee from Him

How the fears encircle me, while shadows ensnare me,
darkness threatens to consume me.

Look down! Look down Lord, and hear my cries,
I want to hear you speak to me.

I am swaying, falling, falling,
I cannot hold myself up any longer,
I feel so afraid, so lost.

Jesus, Jesus, when will you hear me?
I am calling, crying, sighing
I need You now.

See me fall within my fears, dear Lord, hear my prayer.
I cannot stand this any longer- undertake for me!

Lord, I feel peace seeping in my heart- are you really here with me?
A light, I see a light cutting through the darkness, is it You?

I feel a hand lifting me up, drawing me out of the black cocoon my fears had made,
am I free?
I am free! free! free!

In my Shepherd's arms I rest, feeling relief at last. I am free of my fears-
Yes, Jesus undertook for me,
He has banished my fears....


message 11: by Faith (new)

Faith (victorianprincess) | 120 comments There! I finished it. It isn't as good as it would've been, had I edited it, though.


message 12: by Lana, Co-Owner: Lyricist Cookies Sunshine <3 (new)

Lana (ohmylily) | 298 comments Mod
O_O Alright guys. I don't have any lyrics soo... here's an improv..
*clears throat* Let's see..


Conquering Fears

Drowning in darkess..
don't you look down!
Covered in ashes
But you wear a crown
Conquering fears
made from fires below
Devil's behind you
Yeah he's gonna know.

That God's right ahead of you
and you're
Conquering your fears
Yeah He's-
Holding onto you
So go on, shed your tears but-
get back up again
cause there ain't a single thing to dread.
When He's right ahead of you
and you're
Conquering your fears.


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