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message 1: by ˜”*°•.˜”*°• Sheri •°*”˜.•°*”˜, Moderator (last edited Jan 12, 2020 08:31PM) (new)

˜”*°•.˜”*°• Sheri  •°*”˜.•°*”˜ | 1452 comments Mod
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If you were going to write a book what would be your opening sentence?


˜”*°•.˜”*°• Sheri  •°*”˜.•°*”˜ | 1452 comments Mod
My opening sentence would be something like this

"Because she smiled easily and always seemed happy people thought she'd had a happy childhood."


message 3: by David (new)

David Freas (quillracer) | 2214 comments Here's a couple I actually used:

"The ogre wants to see you A-S-A-P," my boss's secretary said.

The snow started mid-morning as a few specks fluttering from the lead-colored sky over Pennsylvania.

Cold air chilled the sweat on my arms when I entered Lou’s Tavern, craving a beer after working late.

I parked my Toyota Tacoma pick-up in the slot with my name on it.


˜”*°•.˜”*°• Sheri  •°*”˜.•°*”˜ | 1452 comments Mod
My favorite :) "The ogre wants to see you A-S-A-P," my boss's secretary said.


message 5: by David (new)

David Freas (quillracer) | 2214 comments Thanks, Sheri.

That was from a book that went nowhere with publishers.


˜”*°•.˜”*°• Sheri  •°*”˜.•°*”˜ | 1452 comments Mod
Quillracer wrote: "Thanks, Sheri.

That was from a book that went nowhere with publishers."


What do they know 😊 🍷 📚


message 7: by Bruce (new)

Bruce | 2018 comments I would start with a sentence I made up,

Once upon a time...

😹


message 8: by Icewineanne, Moderator (new)

Icewineanne | 650 comments Mod
It was a dark and stormy night.......


˜”*°•.˜”*°• Sheri  •°*”˜.•°*”˜ | 1452 comments Mod
Icewineanne wrote: "It was a
dark and stormy
night......."


That's a good one Icewineanne.

Bruce wrote: "I would start with a sentence I made up,

Once upon a time...

😹"


I thought that was your line Bruce. :)


message 10: by Bruce (new)

Bruce | 2018 comments Or, from my favorite animated movie, “Once upon a time - or maybe twice - there was an unearthly paradise called....Pepperland...”


˜”*°•.˜”*°• Sheri  •°*”˜.•°*”˜ | 1452 comments Mod
Bruce wrote: "Or, from my favorite animated movie, “Once upon a time - or maybe twice - there was an unearthly paradise called....Pepperland...”"

I know that movie Bruce.


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