Self development book - 60,000 words - read a couple of chapters

[Geof]

Hi, I looking for someone who will read part or all of my self development book, to check over how the writing flows. The title is Not To Blame.
To sum up the book, I believe we are little different from flowers - place our seed in a good healthy environment with excellent growing conditions and we will flourish but place our seed in an opposite one and we fail to reach our full potential. Most people live in the latter category.
All human beings have such great potential but will fail to flourish because of the environment in which they grow and the opportunities they don't get.
We so love to blame people for the failure of their lives and equally we castigate ourselves when we mess up and so limit any chance of fulfilling our deep desires.
To sum us up - What we become is not who we truly are.
If you are prepared to read a couple of chapters, I would be very grateful and if you could highlight any mistakes you see - I hope there are few. I have been over and over it but still might have missed a few. The book is 60,000 words.
There are 10 chapters - Abuse, Addiction, Fear, Forgiveness, Loneliness, Love, Relationships, Sickness, Society, Suicide.
Thanks
Geof

[Sharon]

Geof,

Self-development drafts like these, are one of my specialties. I very much like the concept of your book and would like to beta-read for you to get it to its finally, polished form. I can beta-read and proofread at the same time. Please email me if you are interested in my beta-reading/editing service and I can provide you with the details. I am fast but thorough. sharonumbaugh@gmail.com

Thanks
SU