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Mother: A Cradle to Hold Me
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message 1: by Keisha (new) - added it

Keisha Thomas | 10 comments Is it true I was created in you.
Is it also true that you were created for me.
I owned your voice.
It was shaped and tune to soothe me.
Your arms were molded into a cradle to hold me, so rock me.
The scent of your body was the air
Perfumed for me to breathe.
Mother,
during those early, dearest days
I did not dream that you had
A large life which included me,
For I had a life
which was only you.


message 2: by Jana (new)

Jana | 7 comments wow this is a really good poem, i hope to read this next.


message 3: by Naajiyah (new)

Naajiyah | 12 comments This poem reminds me of something I wrote in high school, depressing. The poem is beautiful and makes me think of my mother when she says "Your arms were molded into a cradle to hold me, so rock" most powerful sentence. It speaks for itself.


message 4: by Vanessa (new)

Vanessa | 13 comments Love It! The connection between mother and child is spot on.


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