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message 1: by Tessa , Counselor (last edited Nov 23, 2014 09:48AM) (new)

Tessa  (panicrocks95) | 222 comments Mod
PLEASE POST YOUR STUDENT TO BE APPROVED HERE FIRST.
Here we will give you corrections if need be, pointers if you could use them, and general help and advice.
Once your student is approved here you may move it to the approved character topic!
If you're creating a character that is the same species as an already approved character please be sure to line up your lore with theirs, first come first serve so if a new character's lore doesn't line up with the old character the new character has to be changed.

Also Put
<.i><.b>AWAITING APPROVAL<./b><./i>
or
<.i><.b>WORK IN PROGRESS<./b><./i>
above each profile so we know what needs to be done.

Take out the optional details if you aren't going to use them.

To make your HTML work properly take out the periods.


<.b>First Name:<./b>
<.b>Middle Name:<./b>(optional)
<.b>Last Name:<./b>
<.i>Nicknames:<./i>(optional)

<.b>Age:<./b> Must be eighteen or over
<.i>Birthday:<./i>

<.b>Species:<./b>
<.i>Powers:<./i>
<.i>Weaknesses:<./i>Should be close to the number of powers.

<.b>Appearance:<./b>
Put either a brief description paragraph or (view spoiler). You may use anime/drawings, but a live action picture is also required. If you have a non-humanoid character please add a glamour, or human form, since your character will not be allowed in the human town close to the school without one. On school grounds they won't have to use it, but in town it's required. If you have more than one picture keep one visible, and put the others in a spoiler. Please don't use well-known celebrities as characters.

<.b>Personality:<./b> Do put some effort into this. At least three sentences.

<.b>History:<./b> Put effort into this, too. It can be brief, but it should be there. At least three sentences.
<.i>Relations<./i>(optional) or <.i>Family<./i>(optional)

<.b>Other:<./b>(optional)


message 2: by Elizabeth, Headmaster (last edited Nov 18, 2014 02:25PM) (new)

Elizabeth (elizabethhames) | 129 comments Mod
WORK IN PROGRESS

First Name: Puriel
Whose name means "the fire of God;" angel of punishment.
Last Name: Seraph


Age: 23
Birthday: Created on January 1st

Species: Fallen Angel
Powers: He is an angel of fire. His rank being Seraph which means burning one. He can call upon fire at will. Seraph are described as having three pairs of wings, one of which covers their faces as a token of humility, one of which covers their feet as a token of respect and one of which allows them to fly. He can fly but chooses to hide his wings.
Weaknesses: He can only use small amounts of power at a time. If he uses his power to much it literally starts to burn his soul on the inside. This was punishment from God for his defiance. His wings of respect and humility have been taken from him. God graciously let him keep his wings to fly but took the other two as a mark that he had lost all humility and respect for God and for himself.

Appearance:
description
(view spoiler)

<.b>Personality:<./b> Do put some effort into this. At least three sentences.

<.b>History:<./b> Put effort into this, too. It can be brief, but it should be there. At least three sentences.

<.b>Other:<./b>(optional)


message 3: by Dahlia( Prehistoric Nut) (last edited Nov 19, 2014 12:03AM) (new)

Dahlia( Prehistoric Nut) (ILoveAnimals) | 37 comments WORK IN PROGRESS

First Name: Dika [Dee-ka]
Middle Name: Maria
Last Name: Catalan


Age: Twenty years of age, making Dika considerably young for her species
Birthday: The thirteenth of February

Species: Banshee, also known as La llorona
Powers: Telekinesis(view spoiler) The ability to sense a death within three days
Weaknesses: Being a Banshee, Dika naturally fears meeting people or having any form of socialization. She is full aware that she does not bring death upon those she speaks with, but still acts irrational and chooses to isolate herself. Despite her efforts, she has experienced a wailing, which is an event that every Banshee dreads for the Banshee is wracked with pain and slammed with a wall of emotion that leaves her crying out in agony. The length of wailings vary depending on who is doomed and how close the doomed person is to the Banshee, but no matter the time of the wail, a person is to die within three days. As a Banshee, Dika is sensitive to sadness which in turn can affect her too.

Appearance:

Height: 5'6
Hair: Dika has long,thick hair that is jet black.
Eyes: Dika's eyes are so dark brown, they could be mistaken as black. When Dika performs any form of Telekinesis,her eyes glow a bright blue.(view spoiler)
Body: Dika is agile and surprisingly stocky




<.b>Personality:<./b> Do put some effort into this. At least three sentences.

<.b>History:<./b> Put effort into this, too. It can be brief, but it should be there. At least three sentences.

<.b>Other:<./b>(optional)


░I░Y░A░N░A░-“ᴰᵒʷᶰ ᶤᶳ ᵘᵖ˒ ᵘᵖ ᶤᶳ ᵈᵒʷᶰˑ ᴳᵒᵒᵈ ᶤᶳ ᵂᶤᶜᵏᵉᵈ˒ ᵂᶤᶜᵏᵉᵈ ᶤᶳ ᴳᵒᵒᵈˑ ᵀʰᵉ ᵗᶤᵐᵉᶳ ᵃʳᵉ ᶜʰᵃᶰᵍᶤᶰᵍˑ ᵀʰᶤᶳ ᶤᶳ ʷʰᵃᵗ ᴼᶻ ʰᵃᶳ ᶜᵒᵐᵉ ᵗᵒˑ”⁻ᴰᵒʳᵒᵗʰʸ ᴹᵘᶳᵗ ᴰᶤᵉ (thechoseni) | 1 comments WORK IN PROGRESS!!!

First Name: Rhistelynn
Middle Name: Ophelia
Last Name: Dexter
Nicknames: Rhine

Age: 18
Birthday: August 13

Species: Elf ( Not the small ones that you think of when it's Christmas)
Powers: Rhine is kind of an elemental. She mostly uses fire, life and death though. Usually elves have and extra thing or two that they can do. Her extra think is illusions. She's really good at creating them. It's also really hard to fight her because she has perfect recall.
Weaknesses:
Rhine can be really jumpy because of her perfect recall.She hates cameras since they can talk down her illusions, she hates using her death powers sometimes because she could sometimes see things that people really shouldn't.
Appearance:
description
Height: 5'2"
Hair: Bleached blonde
Skin: Pale
Eyes: Blue ice
description
Dressing style:
When home
description
At school:
description


<.b>Personality:<./b> Do put some effort into this. At least three sentences.

<.b>History:<./b> Put effort into this, too. It can be brief, but it should be there. At least three sentences.
<.i>Relations<./i>(optional) or <.i>Family<./i>(optional)

<.b>Other:<./b>(optional)


message 5: by Tessa , Counselor (new)

Tessa  (panicrocks95) | 222 comments Mod
Oh yea! Sorry DD! Approved!


JaneAddict...  (janeaddict) | 160 comments yea since we are like already RPING herr lol


message 7: by DragonDreamer (new)

DragonDreamer | 53 comments Is Rave approved?


message 8: by Lizzie [may soda be eternal], Groundskeeper (new)

Lizzie [may soda be eternal] (kisaragiidolmomo) | 171 comments Mod
You should find a dragon form~


message 9: by DragonDreamer (new)

DragonDreamer | 53 comments soo00000onnnnnn


message 10: by DragonDreamer (new)

DragonDreamer | 53 comments fooooooouuuuuundddddddddddd


message 11: by DragonDreamer (new)

DragonDreamer | 53 comments edited


message 12: by JaneAddict... (new)

JaneAddict...  (janeaddict) | 160 comments OHHHH His ice could come in handy when Roxie sets stuff on fire!


message 13: by Tessa , Counselor (new)

Tessa  (panicrocks95) | 222 comments Mod
Is he from BAP???


message 14: by Lizzie [may soda be eternal], Groundskeeper (new)

Lizzie [may soda be eternal] (kisaragiidolmomo) | 171 comments Mod
nice

you can move him


message 15: by DragonDreamer (new)

DragonDreamer | 53 comments Pretty sure he's from Big Bang ;P


message 16: by DragonDreamer (new)

DragonDreamer | 53 comments And yeah Roxie's fire will come in handy when he freezes everything :D


message 17: by Lizzie [may soda be eternal], Groundskeeper (new)

Lizzie [may soda be eternal] (kisaragiidolmomo) | 171 comments Mod
Nah, he's from BAP


message 18: by DragonDreamer (new)

DragonDreamer | 53 comments Probably right then. I did a Google search for g dragon tho and this pic showed up


message 19: by Tessa , Counselor (new)

Tessa  (panicrocks95) | 222 comments Mod
I Don't think it's GD, but he's sexy as frickfrack nonetheless XD


message 20: by Tessa , Counselor (new)

Tessa  (panicrocks95) | 222 comments Mod
So with your character, I present a few issues.

-Capitilize powers, and give him ones that don't look like super heros
-Use proper capitilization in weaknesses, and put them in properly because that looks ridiculous.
-Find a picture that isn't stretched awkwardly
-Fix the spelling, grammar, and lengthen the personality to actually exist.
-Reword your history to make sense, fix the spelling and grammar

Honestly I'm not totally sure what your character is about, he has no fluff, no padding, and no details, read the other characters, compare, recreate him as a real character please, not one that would fly by on a website for little kids.

Also listen to Jane, she gives great advice.


Zed the Great and Powerful! (Jayson) Sorry my mistake. Ill just change his species.


Zed the Great and Powerful! (Jayson) Actually im not very interested in this rp so i think i am going to just leave this group. Goodbye.


message 23: by Tessa , Counselor (new)

Tessa  (panicrocks95) | 222 comments Mod
Hah, whatever.


message 24: by Lizzie [may soda be eternal], Groundskeeper (new)

Lizzie [may soda be eternal] (kisaragiidolmomo) | 171 comments Mod
First of all, you need to cut it down to one post. Scrap whatever you don't need, like the XX chromosome part, shorten the personality to a paragraph or two, maybe see if there's anything in her history not important enough to keep. You also don't need all the brackets and stuff, the coding itself is fine. It doesn't have to be super fancy.
Embed the image please, and try to find a version or similar pic that doesn't have a watermark.


message 25: by Lizzie [may soda be eternal], Groundskeeper (new)

Lizzie [may soda be eternal] (kisaragiidolmomo) | 171 comments Mod
Another thing for now, you can put the strengths/weaknesses together, so all her strengths, supernatural or otherwise, are in one section, and same with the weaknesses.


message 26: by JaneAddict... (new)

JaneAddict...  (janeaddict) | 160 comments Supernatural UNIVERSITY.... implies college or university age students if a student is under 18 I would assume there is an extremely good reason they are here since most of the characters are actually much older.


message 27: by Lizzie [may soda be eternal], Groundskeeper (new)

Lizzie [may soda be eternal] (kisaragiidolmomo) | 171 comments Mod
Swap the brackets for just a colon after the word
Adjust the history, you don't need the titles.
Embed images, add height and weight to the appearance traits
no need for significant object


message 28: by Ken (new)

Ken (kensamcampo) | 1 comments First Name: Taylor
Middle Name: Marie
Last Name: Cauldwell
Nicknames: Tay or Mar

Age: 19
Birthday: July 3rd

Species: Elf
Powers:
+ Poison Emmission
+ Poison Immunity
+ Illusion Casting
+ Echolocation
+ Shapeshifting (animals, other things as well but those take more energy)
Weaknesses:
-Chocolate
- love
- the idea of losing
- losing friends
- milk chocolate
- dark chocolate
- white chocolate
- being bullied
- having people mess with her

Appearance:


Personality: She is friendly but shy when you first meet her. She is kind and caring. She loves archery and hunting. She is sweet and loves spending time with others.

History: She was born in Salem, Oregon to a well known family. She is the first born in her family so she gets the free run most of the time. She goes hunting with her sisters.
Relations
Aaron Blackthorne (Best Friend)
Bora Blackthorne (Best Friend)
Family
Jayden Cauldwell (Mother) - Deceased
Jackson Cauldwell (Father) - Deceased
Kaylee Cauldwell (Paternal Aunt) - Deceased

Lana Cauldwell (Sister, 17 years old, open for creation)
Hailee Cauldwell (Sister, 14 years old, open for creation)
Ashlee Cauldwell (Sister, 11 years old , open for creation )
Katherine "Kate" Cauldwell (Sister, 9 years old, open for creation, twins with Holly)
Holly Cauldwell (Sister, 9 years old, open for creation, twins with Katherine)
Other: close with sisters , drives a 1967 red impala


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