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message 1: by Rhystlynne (last edited Oct 27, 2014 05:51PM) (new)

Rhystlynne (inkbottleburning) | 314 comments (view spoiler)


Isabel of the Sea (oceangirlie) Oooo! Sounds very light and pretty. I LOVE it!


message 3: by [deleted user] (last edited Oct 28, 2014 11:50AM) (new)

Good job can't wait to read more


message 4: by Rhystlynne (last edited Oct 27, 2014 06:38PM) (new)

Rhystlynne (inkbottleburning) | 314 comments Thank you, I really enjoy being able to receive compliments and feedback, but if you have any suggestions or constructive criticism for me I'd like hear those too.


Isabel of the Sea (oceangirlie) Okay.


message 6: by em_panada (new)

em_panada Such an elegant and poetic description of a flower! Makes me want to have a Blood Blossom in my story. :D


message 7: by SleepingEsper (new)

SleepingEsper | 23 comments Rhystlynne wrote: "
For the blood blossoms
Blossom once in the night.
A night that is black with billows, not bright
The blossoms will bloom
Such a breath-taking sight,
They glow in the gloom
With an eerie red light"


This was a Beautiful write, nice Flow and very description. :3


message 8: by Madison (new)

Madison | 116 comments I see fairies dancing around in the light of the blood blossoms in this poem. You are a very gifted writer. Love your work.


message 9: by Rhystlynne (new)

Rhystlynne (inkbottleburning) | 314 comments Thank you Madison


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