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message 1: by Sam1370 (last edited Sep 09, 2019 06:39PM) (new)

Sam1370 | 6 comments Hi, I'm 13 and made a book thing with some of my friends, if you want to look at it that's fine, it's a bit cringy and has some bad jokes. Anyway, here are the links. It's unfinished, just looking for some feedback. Thanks!

Google Drive link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1KX33...
Direct Link: https://drive.google.com/uc?export=do...


message 2: by J (new)

J Millerson | 12 comments Sure! I can take a look young man! It is always good to see the torch being handed to the next generation!


message 3: by Sam1370 (new)

Sam1370 | 6 comments J wrote: "Sure! I can take a look young man! It is always good to see the torch being handed to the next generation!"

Thank, it has bad memes and a lot of references to school stuff so you might be a bit confused, thanks for taking a look!


message 4: by J (new)

J Millerson | 12 comments No problem! I may be old, but, I'm rather tech-savvy for my age!


message 5: by J (new)

J Millerson | 12 comments J wrote: "No problem! I may be old, but, I'm rather tech-savvy for my age!"

Oh, one question, is this going to be used as a school project?


message 6: by Sam1370 (new)

Sam1370 | 6 comments J wrote: "J wrote: "No problem! I may be old, but, I'm rather tech-savvy for my age!"

Oh, one question, is this going to be used as a school project?"


Nope lol, we're just doing this for fun and for a meme


message 7: by J (new)

J Millerson | 12 comments Good, good, just asking.


message 8: by Sam1370 (new)

Sam1370 | 6 comments J wrote: "Good, good, just asking."

Of course! It's completely fine


message 9: by J (last edited Sep 09, 2019 08:30PM) (new)

J Millerson | 12 comments Done, here is some basic criticism, so sorry if it is rather short, I had to go somewhere. So, I had to rush it somewhat, so sorry for the inconvenience.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1f...


message 10: by Sam1370 (last edited Sep 09, 2019 09:04PM) (new)

Sam1370 | 6 comments J wrote: "Done, here is some basic criticism, so sorry if it is rather short, I had to go somewhere. So, I had to rush it somewhat, so sorry for the inconvenience.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1f......"


No need to apologize! Thank you so much for your feedback. I really appreciate it, since I am not paying anyone for this I did not expect much. Thanks!


message 11: by J (new)

J Millerson | 12 comments No problem, be sure to do what you have passion for!


message 12: by Sam1370 (new)

Sam1370 | 6 comments J wrote: "No problem, be sure to do what you have passion for!"

Thank you!


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