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message 1: by Carter, We need to get this group going again (new)

Carter | 131 comments Mod
This discussion board is here so all of us can post stories for everyone else to critique. Please don't post stories that you are going to use for a contest. Of course you can post it after theco test is over


message 2: by Acacia (new)

Acacia (acaciaa) My story:

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

My poetry:

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

I have a few other things up there, but this is the stuff that's actually, you know...any good.


message 3: by [deleted user] (new)

hmmmm okay well heres mine im not finished yet plz comment tho!

www.goodreads.com/46134.Violet_Sky?ch...



message 4: by Carter, We need to get this group going again (new)

Carter | 131 comments Mod
Lily the Slightly Crazy wrote: "Okay, here's my story:

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4..."


I thougt it was really interesting and i think you should keep writing. Tell me when there is more




message 5: by Carter, We need to get this group going again (last edited Aug 29, 2009 05:38AM) (new)

Carter | 131 comments Mod
Acacia wrote: "My story:

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

My poetry:

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...


I have a few other things up there, but this is the stuff that's actu..."


I read the first chapter of your story and i loved it im going to read more later maybe. It was great


message 6: by Carter, We need to get this group going again (new)

Carter | 131 comments Mod
Catherine wrote: "hmmmm okay well heres mine im not finished yet plz comment tho!

www.goodreads.com/46134.Violet_Sky?ch...
"


Your link didnt work. hmmm...


message 7: by Carter, We need to get this group going again (new)

Carter | 131 comments Mod
here is my story. I wrote it for another group contest and tied for first place. The topic was secret.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...


message 8: by [deleted user] (last edited Aug 29, 2009 08:38AM) (new)

Carter wrote: "Catherine wrote: "hmmmm okay well heres mine im not finished yet plz comment tho!

www.goodreads.com/46134.Violet_Sky?ch...
"

Your link didnt work. hmmm..."

Whoops my bad---here
www.goodreads.com/story/show/46134.Vi...
I tried it it works!! Plz comment!!






message 9: by [deleted user] (new)

I know there r a lot of chapters but theyr short and pretty smooth reading!!


message 10: by Carter, We need to get this group going again (new)

Carter | 131 comments Mod
I love the first one!!!


message 11: by [deleted user] (last edited Aug 29, 2009 10:24AM) (new)

Thx!! Ya there r lots more if anybodys interested, but im not done yet, almost tho!!!


message 12: by Maryam. (new)

Maryam. | 70 comments Wait a minute.....your name was first...........Equine Lover?


message 13: by Acacia (new)

Acacia (acaciaa) Ooooh, well then I remember you!


message 14: by Maryam. (new)

Maryam. | 70 comments Lol!!


message 15: by Acacia (new)

Acacia (acaciaa) Haha, a little. :D


message 16: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 22 comments Please give me some critism for this story :]

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...


message 17: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 22 comments Hello wrote: "Kriss wrote: "Please give me some critism for this story :]

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4..."

Kriss, the only thing that i can see wrong with your story is a few spe..."



Thanks for the help... I'm probably going to go over the spelling and grammer mistakes soon :]




message 18: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 22 comments Chapter twenty for Shadows of Light... Please, please, please, read and comment!
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...


message 19: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 22 comments Thankies :]


message 20: by Maryam. (last edited Sep 06, 2009 01:34AM) (new)

Maryam. | 70 comments Please give me comments and feedback!

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...


message 21: by [deleted user] (new)

Five


message 22: by Maryam. (new)

Maryam. | 70 comments Lol, five???


message 23: by [deleted user] (new)

At least, that ive seen but im pretty sure u put it in the writing is my passion one too so its probably 6 but i dont check that one tht often!! Well whatever gets it read, right!!!


message 24: by Maryam. (new)

Maryam. | 70 comments Lol...I'am STILL confused!!Five what??And yes...I did put it in the writing is my passion group!


message 25: by [deleted user] (new)

Okay u lut the link up like 6 or 7 times that ive counted! Thts what i meant!! lol its so funny tho cuz like evrytime i go in a group ur in im like ok i bet its here too!!!


message 26: by Maryam. (new)

Maryam. | 70 comments Hehehehe!!!!I'am just sort of excited for the story!!AND want comments!!Lol


message 27: by [deleted user] (new)

i knw the feeling! lol


message 28: by Maryam. (new)

Maryam. | 70 comments I have written chapter 1!
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...


message 29: by [deleted user] (new)

yay!! i just read it its so good!!!


message 30: by Maryam. (new)

Maryam. | 70 comments Hehe, Thank you!!


message 31: by Carter, We need to get this group going again (new)

Carter | 131 comments Mod
Hello wrote: "okay, in my story i just switched from one characters POV to anothers. can someone please read chap 12 (seph's POV) and 13 (Luke's POV) and tell me if the transition is clear enough?

http://www...."


it is clear. I love!!!!!!! That story!!!!!!!! Keep on writing!!!!!!!!




message 32: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 22 comments Chapter Twenty-One for Shadows of Light is finished, please, please, please read and leave me a comment :]

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...


message 33: by [deleted user] (new)

how about: under cover?

oh, and i under stand if you don't want to use it.


message 34: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 22 comments This must be some kind of record for me... Chapter Twenty-Two is up for Shadows of Light, please read and leave a comment:

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...


message 35: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 22 comments I just got over my writers block for The Black Rose, please, please, please read the three chapters I have posted and leave me a comment :]

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...


message 37: by ♫Huneeya♥ (new)

♫Huneeya♥ | 39 comments chapter 4 is up! PLS PLS PLS READ AND COMMENT! :]
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...


message 38: by Maryam. (new)

Maryam. | 70 comments I have!!Well..you already know that..Soo...


message 39: by [deleted user] (new)

Hey guys! Whered everybody go, nobodys on this anymore! :(

Well anyway new chapter of violet sky!!

www.goodreads.com/story/show/46134.Vi...

Check it out!! =DDD


message 40: by [deleted user] (new)

i added more ^^ just, fyi...


message 41: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 22 comments Yes! I finished chapter six for Fallen. Please read and leave a comment :)

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...


message 42: by Carter, We need to get this group going again (new)

Carter | 131 comments Mod
I am on my phone so I can't do a link. Will you search carter's writing and read the two stories I have posted there?


message 43: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 22 comments I've finished chapter eight for Fallen, please, please, please read and leave a comment... I really would like to know if this chapter flows right with the rest of the story or if its weird... :]

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...


message 44: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 22 comments Yes! I finished chapter 9 for fallen, please, please read and leave a comment :)

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...


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