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message 1: by Rollie (last edited Aug 24, 2009 06:08AM) (new)

Rollie (zheick) FORBIDDEN WHISPER


Behind the normal rotation of the earth, there's a secret community where the people have their own special abilities.
Between their worlds there are societies who are creating hidden wars that cause visible mass destructions.
When Charmaine Steph Howell discovered that her blood line belongs to a secret society, she was ready then to hear more of the fact even if it causes her revenge.
Revenge for those people who bounded her life span even if it means a bad omen; fighting the man who saved her life more than she ever expected.




i need an advice if i really need to continue this one or not..please help.. i have my first six chapters of it but i'm still hesitating if will continue this one...


here:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...


message 2: by Rollie (new)

Rollie (zheick) thanks kaitlin...


message 3: by Rollie (new)

Rollie (zheick) anyway, i already edited my manuscript. please comment
here' the link:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...


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