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Authors Seeking FREE Betas > 38k Rom-Com Novella (enemies-to-lovers)

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message 1: by Amelia (new)

Amelia Kingston | 5 comments Hey guys.

I'm writing a small town enemies-to-lovers rom-com novella (~38k words) and am looking for a handful of beta readers to give me some thoughts on plot, structure, character development, dialogue, etc.

Here's a quick blurb:

I gave my heart to Elijah Monroe when I was sixteen. Too bad he didn't want it. Probably for the best, since he's my step-brother.

I couldn't get out Nowhere-ville, California—and away from Elijah—fast enough. When I left for college I vowed never to come back. Six years later, I have my teaching credential and a mountain of student loan debt. A summer back at home is about as tempting as slitting my wrist and jumping into a shark tank. But, free rent and a guaranteed summer teaching job are the smart move.

It's three months. I can survive anything for three months. I can't say the same for Elijah. I may murder him with my bare hands. That'll wipe the smug smirk of his gorgeous face.

Let me know if you're interested.

Cheers.

Amelia (ameliakingstonbooks at gmail.com)


message 2: by Jenni (new)

Jenni Lynn | 63 comments The blurb sounds great. I'd be happy to take a look. Pm me if you still need someone.
Jenni


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