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message 1: by Virginia (new)

Virginia | 2 comments Literary Short Story - The story of Mathias Luke, an unassuming odd young man living in a small New England town and Anthony, the eccentric and rather egotistical protagonist. Anthony moves to this quaint town with his wife and dog to settle down and start their family but quickly discovers a growing obsession with the shadow that is Mathias.  Anthony discovers exactly who Mathias is, why he is the way he is, and becomes deeply involved in the young man’s eventual fate. 

Deals with sensitive subjects; sexual abuse, mental health, murder (oh my).
Around 11,000 words depending on the day.

Looking for any feedback - tone, structure, dialogue, grammar, destruction of my overall theme. I’m down.

DM, reply, or carrier pigeon if interested. 

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Alex (alexjb) | 7 comments Hi Virginia. I'd love to read your story. My email address is

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