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Authors Seeking FREE Betas > Modern Gothic Horror Novel 63,000 words

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message 1: by Justin (new)

Justin (justinbienvenue) | 13 comments Hey Everyone,
I am looking for 2 or 3 people interested in beta reading my Urban Gothic Horror novel, The Wax Factory. I am looking for feedback on readability, plot, character, as well as the flow, and mood. Just to make sure things sound right and make sense.

I am having someone edit the book afterward so you may see mistakes and errors, please just ignore them, they will be fixed after.

Here is the blurb below, if you're interested please comment below or DM me.

Would you enter a creepy thought to be abandoned factory without knowing what awaits you on the other side?
All Dmitri Townsend wanted was the perfect college project. When he and his girlfriend Melina hear about the Wax Factory it sounds and looks ideal, but is everything as it seems? It was once the pride and joy of Ghyslain Vandaldrake, the visionary who was Edison, Dr. Frankenstein, and Lovecraft if they had wax fetishes. He sculpted wax for people in the mid to late 1800s but saw his dreams shattered by unforeseen circumstances. Gustav Vanaldrake dreams of reopening the factory that his great-grandfather was forced to sell. However dark sinister forces are at work in the Wax factory and the deeper Dmitri and Melina explore, the stranger things become. Can Gustav reclaim the glory that forced his great-grandfather to never be heard from again?
Will this be the college project to die for? Perfect for fans of horror and urban gothic, do you dare to step foot in “The Wax Factory?”

If you're interested in reading and going over it please let me know,
-Justin


message 2: by Jennifer (new)

Jennifer Bourgeois (jennykatharina) | 237 comments I would love to it. Please pm me


message 3: by Justin (new)

Justin (justinbienvenue) | 13 comments Messaged you.


message 4: by I.W.J. (new)

I.W.J. Keller | 10 comments I'm into gothic. I can give it a read if you like.


message 5: by Justin (new)

Justin (justinbienvenue) | 13 comments Sweet, Yeah send me a message with your email and I'll go over it with you.


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