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Authors Seeking FREE Betas > YA Fantasy set in Africa (Completed/First Two Chapters)

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message 1: by Jeremy (new)

Jeremy J. | 18 comments I'm looking for someone to take a look at the first two chapters of my manuscript. I would appreciate an overall look at it, but specifically, I'd like some feedback on my writing style and if I'm descriptive enough (characters, surroundings, emotions, etc.).

It's a cross between Lion King, Jungle Book, and Animorphs. If interested, I'll give the full pitch from my query letter.

Would really appreciate your time during the holiday season.


message 2: by Amashy (new)

Amashy | 9 comments Hi, message me. This sounds interesting!

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