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Authors Seeking FREE Betas > An Erotic Comedy Novel - Full novel - 75,000 words

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message 1: by Malcolm (new)

Malcolm Logan (malcolmdavidlogan) | 9 comments "Sexy Bitch" is a madcap sex revenge fantasy for the #metoo generation, an erotic comedy of millennial proportions.

Kat Mumphers is by far the hottest young woman in her small western Kansas town, and she knows it. But when she moves to Los Angeles to take a role on a canceled reality series, she finds herself unemployed and desperate. Enter Brett Jarrett, a handsome, smooth-talking talent agent who bears a striking resemblance to a porn star Kat saw in an adult video. Kat is intrigued, but Brett proves to be more dangerous and elusive than she could have imagined, and following a whirlwind romance that takes her from Griffith Park to the Getty Museum, from the abandoned Nazi camp at Murphy's Ranch to the hell-portal at Devil's Gate Dam, she finds herself being slowly drawn into the world of pornography. It is definitely not for Kat, and with the help of some newfound friends she strikes back, freeing herself from the clutches of her handsome predator and paying him back in memorable fashion.

Erotic comedy is a somewhat unique genre, building on the platform of Sex Comedy with more explicit sex scenes. If you are offended by erotica in general or appalled by the idea that sex can be funny, this is probably not for you. But if sex doesn't bother you, and you enjoy a good laugh, I welcome your feedback. I am particularly interested in getting the feedback of both female and male readers. "Sexy Bitch" is 275 pages double-spaced Times New Roman.


message 2: by Jennifer (new)

Jennifer Bourgeois (jennykatharina) | 237 comments I am interested. Please Pm me


message 3: by Malcolm (new)

Malcolm Logan (malcolmdavidlogan) | 9 comments Jennifer wrote: "I am interested. Please Pm me"

I'm sorry. What does Pm me mean?


message 4: by Malcolm (new)

Malcolm Logan (malcolmdavidlogan) | 9 comments Jennifer wrote: "I am interested. Please Pm me"

Sorry for being such a dope. You want me to pm you on Facebook. Got it.


message 5: by Jennifer (new)

Jennifer Bourgeois (jennykatharina) | 237 comments Malcolm wrote: "Jennifer wrote: "I am interested. Please Pm me"

Sorry for being such a dope. You want me to pm you on Facebook. Got it."


You can do that. But That was not what I meant send me a private message here .


message 6: by Jutta (new)

Jutta (juttas) | 9 comments Hi Malcolm,

I'd be interested to read this, I've sent you a private message on here but not sure if you've seen it?

Do you have an email I can contact you on please?

Thanks,

Jutta


message 7: by Julie (new)

Julie Guay-de la ronde | 59 comments Interested! julieguay@hotmail.com


message 8: by Alex (new)

Alex (alexjb) | 7 comments I'm interested as well. alexjblue@gmail.com


message 9: by Erica (new)

Erica Hernandez | 10 comments I’m happy to help if you’d like additional feedback


message 10: by Malcolm (new)

Malcolm Logan (malcolmdavidlogan) | 9 comments Jutta, You can contact me at malcolmdavidlogan@gmail.com and I'll send you the mobi file of Sexy Bitch.

Malcolm


message 11: by Malcolm (new)

Malcolm Logan (malcolmdavidlogan) | 9 comments Happy to send you the mobi file so you can read and critique Sexy Bitch. Contact me at malcolmdavidlogan@gmail.com


message 12: by Malcolm (new)

Malcolm Logan (malcolmdavidlogan) | 9 comments Hello Alex, thanks for your interest. Glad to have your feedback on Sexy Bitch. Contact me at malcolmdavidlogan@gmail.com and I'll send you the mobi file.

Malcolm


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