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Carrie D. Miller (carriedmiller) | 6 comments After you've stared at the words for so long, you can no longer see the problems BUT you know they are there, lurking, laughing at you, hiding in plain sight. That's where you come in!

My second novel is in two parts. Part one follows one MC and part two follows twin sisters with the MC from part one having a supporting role. In a nutshell, the twin sisters have to stop their grandmother's dead lover from releasing an unstoppable evil. (Mwahaha!)

I'm in the 4th round of revisions and working with a critique partner. I'd love more eyes to help this story be the best it can be.

Thanks in advance!


Working blurb:

Magda stands in the cemetery under the moonlight waiting for the spell to work, for her lover to return. With the souls she’s bound to him, his resurrection is at hand. But what she’s done she cannot undo and Magda will soon learn she should have left him in the ground.

Twins Avery and Chloe Parsons know little of magick and nothing of demons. When their grandmother sends them a cryptic letter and a sinister looking book filled with illegible scrawls, they set out for Prague to check on her.

A handsome yet disturbing stranger answers the door of their grandmother’s apartment and tells the girls the woman who used to live there is dead. They are devastated…and now highly suspicious.

Drawn to a cracked crystal ball in a curiosity shop, Chloe discovers the spirit of their grandmother within who tells them a frightening tale of lust, naivety, betrayal, and demons.

Armed with a book of dark magick they can’t read and their grandmother’s spirit in a cracked crystal ball, the twins must stop Magda’s dead lover before he unleashes an unstoppable evil.

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Jennifer Bourgeois (jennykatharina) | 237 comments I would love read it please PM me

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