Fantasy/ Sci Fi / 143k

[Arwen]

Hi, I am looking for feedback and another set of eyes for the first book of this series. I would love some feedback with grammar, flow and most importantly plot lines. These books have probably been edited and re-read 17 to 30 times.
Volume 1:
A young woman is kidnapped by magical sparkly lights and is taken to a world where grey arm sucking bug men destroyed humanity. Aryn helps this world with a very scary King and witches out to destroy her, and sacrifices all that she is for true love and a family. (synopsis still in editing phase be gentle)

[Jennifer]

If you are still interested I would love to read it. I have 4 people in line. If you are still interested, you can PM me.