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message 1: by Beverley, Queen/Moderator (new)

Beverley (beverleyongoodreads) | 201 comments Mod
Each person makes up their own line or two too add to a song. Try to keep a main idea of the song when adding lines. Like let's not stray from boyfriends to like, cheese.


Wolfie-the-dork (wolfiewheeee) cool!^^

Checking out my window I see the falling of the rain,


message 3: by Jenn (new)

Jenn I start to think, and realize there is no one left to blame,


message 4: by Beverley, Queen/Moderator (new)

Beverley (beverleyongoodreads) | 201 comments Mod
it makes me sad i'm feeling pain


message 5: by Anony-miss (new)

Anony-miss a-non-y-miss | 6 comments It's all too much, it's nothing I can tame


message 6: by Jenn (last edited Aug 17, 2009 11:55AM) (new)

Jenn ((CHORUS))

So tell me, is there anything left?


message 7: by Jenn (new)

Jenn ((really? ive been hearing a soft drum beat, and now some harder guitar stuff coming in at the chorus( aka, my last post)))


message 8: by Rebecca (new)

Rebecca That isnt messed up?


((ive been hearing drums and guitar playing softly, then at the chorus hard rock drums and guitar going nyowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww nyow nyow nyowwwwwwwww for the whole chorus))


message 9: by Rebecca (new)

Rebecca ((oh, and my bff and i are starting a rock band, and i was wondering if after this song is done, if we might be able to sing it?cuz we need music to sing!!!!!))


message 10: by Bridget (new)

Bridget I need to find someone


message 11: by Beverley, Queen/Moderator (new)

Beverley (beverleyongoodreads) | 201 comments Mod
but baby it won't be you,
cuz you're gone for good


message 12: by Jenn (new)

Jenn So can you tell me, what did I do?


message 13: by Beverley, Queen/Moderator (new)

Beverley (beverleyongoodreads) | 201 comments Mod
was it our kiss, the dance, or the way i said i love you


message 14: by Jenn (new)

Jenn I just want you back, but you wont let me,


message 15: by Beverley, Queen/Moderator (new)

Beverley (beverleyongoodreads) | 201 comments Mod
my heart is fluttering for you to set me free,
forgive and forget, that's all i need.


message 16: by Beverley, Queen/Moderator (new)

Beverley (beverleyongoodreads) | 201 comments Mod
that all i need is for you to love me


message 17: by Annemarie (new)

Annemarie Carlson (annielawlz) | 84 comments when I just started rising up


message 18: by Jenn (new)

Jenn I need and want you, but I know it wont happen.


message 19: by Jenn (new)

Jenn Your far from it, and I deserve better,
But all I want is you.


message 20: by Beverley, Queen/Moderator (new)

Beverley (beverleyongoodreads) | 201 comments Mod
Lyssa wrote: "((Should we repeat?))"

haha, maybe we should stop and type it all up, anyone want to do it? i'm not, it's dinner time!


message 21: by Beverley, Queen/Moderator (new)

Beverley (beverleyongoodreads) | 201 comments Mod
here come the memories
happy and sad,
never said thank you for that.


message 22: by Noelle (last edited Aug 24, 2009 01:26PM) (new)

Noelle (missnoellerenee) | 10 comments Checking out my window I see the falling of the rain,
I start to think, and realize there is no one left to blame,
it makes me sad i'm feeling pain
It's all too much, it's nothing I can tame

((CHORUS))
So tell me, is there anything left?
That isnt messed up?
After all you've done
fine with me. Good luck!
I need to find someone
Who'll forgive what I've done
but baby it won't be you,
cuz you're gone for good
So can you tell me, what did I do?
was it our kiss, the dance, or the way
i said i love you
Why did you have to go and tear me down?
when I just started rising up
I need and want you, but I know it wont happen.

((END CHORUS ))

I just want you back, but you wont let me,
my heart is fluttering for you to set me free,
forgive and forget, that's all i need.
how long will it take for you to see
that all i need is for you to love me
Life isn't a fairy tale
I'm not a princess and your not prince charming
here come the memories
happy and sad,
never said thank you for that.
Even after all you did.
why cant i just forget...
and be gone



message 23: by Beverley, Queen/Moderator (new)

Beverley (beverleyongoodreads) | 201 comments Mod
awesome! that takes dedication! haha.


message 24: by Noelle (new)

Noelle (missnoellerenee) | 10 comments Demi wrote: "awesome! that takes dedication! haha."

Lol. I'm in ♥ w/ copy and paste



message 25: by Jenn (new)

Jenn nice


message 26: by Noelle (new)

Noelle (missnoellerenee) | 10 comments ((You guys can keep going and I will add it!))


message 27: by Jenn (new)

Jenn ((i think right now we should do another chorus, then figure out the next verse))


message 28: by Beverley, Queen/Moderator (new)

Beverley (beverleyongoodreads) | 201 comments Mod
y don't we start a new song, oh wait, we need to name this one.


message 29: by Jenn (new)

Jenn yeah, lets stat a new one....what should we name this one?


message 30: by Annemarie (new)

Annemarie Carlson (annielawlz) | 84 comments no idea


message 31: by Amelia (new)

Amelia Wow this isn't depressing AT ALL! lol




message 32: by Jenn (new)

Jenn lol


message 33: by Magen (new)

Magen (magen0222) | 13 comments why cant i just forget...
and be gone


message 34: by Beverley, Queen/Moderator (new)

Beverley (beverleyongoodreads) | 201 comments Mod
Magen wrote: "why cant i just forget...
and be gone"


(is this the new song?)


message 35: by Jenn (new)

Jenn Lyssa wrote: "cool. It turned out a lot better than I thought it would."

yeah your right


message 36: by Magen (new)

Magen (magen0222) | 13 comments yeah sure it can either be the begining of a new song or (what i intended it to be) the LAST 2 lines of the previous song


message 37: by Jenn (new)

Jenn hmmm...it works either way....


message 38: by Magen (new)

Magen (magen0222) | 13 comments yeah. it does. and i didnt even intend for it to. : )


message 39: by Noelle (new)

Noelle (missnoellerenee) | 10 comments Magen wrote: "yeah sure it can either be the begining of a new song or (what i intended it to be) the LAST 2 lines of the previous song"

I added it.


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