I'm currently working on a new project where the two main protagonists are dealing with the aftermaths of terrible breakups and they end up being each other's rebound. Throughout the story, they build a strong friendship that is tested by the feelings they start developing for each other. That's the overall plot.
I have seven chapters written and would like another set of eyes to read over it and give me some honest feedback about the plot structure and character development I have created. I'd like to see if this story seems like its going anywhere with what I have written so far. I'd love to write about relatable flawed characters that readers can fall in love with. Other feedback about scene structures/ dialogue/ or descriptions is always helpful too.
If anyone is interested please comment and let me know. I'd gladly look over your work as well. :)
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I have seven chapters written and would like another set of eyes to read over it and give me some honest feedback about the plot structure and character development I have created. I'd like to see if this story seems like its going anywhere with what I have written so far. I'd love to write about relatable flawed characters that readers can fall in love with. Other feedback about scene structures/ dialogue/ or descriptions is always helpful too.
If anyone is interested please comment and let me know. I'd gladly look over your work as well. :)