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message 1: by D.T. (last edited Dec 26, 2018 09:41PM) (new)

D.T. Henderson | 24 comments Hello, I'm looking for beta readers for my story, Dreaded Dinner Party.

Blurb:
Who’s tired of her dinner party-throwing parents? Curi Andrews is.

But when a nasty couple tries to sabotage her parents’ party, Curi flips.

It’s up to Curi to stop them!

Of course, she’s going to eat some delicious food along the way.

Who will help her? Maybe the mischievous traveler Mister Wolfeman? Jolly Toki? Ambitious Ophelia?

Unfortunately for Curi, sometimes, things still go up in flames.

Character Bios:
Curi Andrews, the main character, is a quiet and overly polite but opinionated young teen around 14-ish, growing up in a two-parent, Afr-Am home with an older brother. She's trying to learn to speak her mind more instead of shrinking back in uncomfortable situations. She also has to learn the hard way about idolizing people.

Cornelius "Cooleo" is a laid-back yet snarky boy who tries to appear much cooler than he is to his own dismay. He has a quick temper that flares when he easily becomes embarrassed.

Toki Kisaragi, an Asian-American teen, is a super jolly and fun-loving dude with no filter. Curi thinks she has him figured out, but he keeps surprising her.

Wolfeman is a cocky, pompous young man with an unusually flowery way of speech. He's a free-spirit that loves traveling the world, but recently due to a series of events has been anchored home and forced to pick-up a desk-job.

Lastly, Victorine-Ophelia "Ophelia" is a young woman (around 20's) who is everything Curi aspires to be. She is confident, intelligent, and beautiful. Ophelia isn't afraid to do whatever she needs to succeed or be happy.

This is a completed 40k (210 pages) novel.
I would like to self-publish this soon, but I wanted to get a few more pairs of eyes to see this before I do that.

Thanks in advance!


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I'm interested send it along. If you need an email it is: birthwailofeternity@gmail.com


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D.T. Henderson | 24 comments bump


message 4: by Gayatri (new)

Gayatri (mangolover) | 1 comments I am new to beta reading but really interested in your work. If you need you can email me varma92.gayatri@gmail.com


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