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80k fictional story - looking for beta reader(s)

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message 1: by James (new)

James | 2 comments The book is general fiction
80K words
Third person
Limited sex, nothing graphic
Limited violence, nothing graphic
No triggers

The human tapestry that blankets the earth on which we live is colorful and dreadful. Some threads are short. Some are long. Some are colorful and vibrant. Some are tattered and beaten. Few are perfect. Most are a little bit of everything, changing over time. Some threads start off beautiful and strong but fade into tatters. Others start off weak and nearly break but become strong and robust.
Each thread is a unique story.
This is a story about one man, one thread of the vast human tapestry.
John begins his life in what appears as a typical mundane way. A baby is welcomed into a family, but the happy family facade doesn't last long. As John grows, he faces many demons…including one he calls Mother. Forces try to pull him down into a life of drugs and crime. Not all is bleak, though. He finds love, what he believes is true love.  
And yet, through it all, somehow, John's thread becomes one of the strongest of all.
This is a story of one boy who becomes a man

If interested please message me.

message 2: by Melva (last edited Jul 20, 2018 09:32AM) (new)

Melva Henderson I am willing to read your fictional story if you want to email it to with "JAMES" in the subject line so I know it is from you.

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