Fantasy Short Story, roughly 6k words.

[Jack]

Hi,

I'm just wondering if anyone would be interested in having a look at a short story I have written. I would guess it classes as low fantasy as the magic is minimal, but it is there.

I'm looking for the following things:

- Does the story keep you interested?
- Are there any glaring inconsistencies or plot holes?
- Is the pacing good?
- Are the characters believable?

Drop me a message if interested.

Thanks.

Jack

[JLSchmidt]

Hello Jack, I'd be interested in reading. I write as well in multiple genre but while interested in fantasy/magical have been unable to write it.

Currently and for some time been in long running novel writers critique group and am looking for some shorter works to read/critique/give wanted feedback.

JLS

[Jack]

Hi Jennifer,

Thank you for getting back to me. It is greatly appreciated. Would it be okay if you gave me your email so I can email the file for the story over?

Jack

[Jack]

It's probably best to send this to me through private message :D

[Stephanie]

Hi! I would be interested in reading your short story! If you're still looking for readers, drop me a PM!