Vampire short story - betas needed

[Timothy]

A young Transylvanian girl in love daringly skips out of the house and into the woods with a boy one night. They dismiss the idea of danger with youthful carelessness, only to find out that they're being hunted.

I'm looking for beta readers to give feedback on the first draft of the short story, which will serve as a prologue for Dracula. If you're interested, please let me know. :)

11k words; mild horror/Halloween genre

Thanks in advance. :)

[Timothy]

Thanks for responding! :)

I put it up on Wattpad so that it's easier to read. Any comments you have can be left there or emailed to tim@timothybaril.com.

https://www.wattpad.com/story/1538867...