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Critique Partners and Swaps > Beta swap, short horror/dark fantasy for any fiction genre

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message 1: by Amanda (new)

Amanda | 80 comments Hello,
I would love to get feedback for a short horror/ dark fantasy story I'm working on. It's about 3200 words, here's the synopsis:

A young woman is haunted by the ghost of the woman who hurt her while another victim targets someone she loves.

I'd like to know stuff like if you think it works as a horror or dark fantasy, if it kept you interested, if it bored you, how the pacing was, what you thought of the writing style and word flow and if you have any questions about anything you didn't get. Also feel free to point out any plot holes or errors in logic and things like that as well as anything from the beta reading checklist posted in this forum that you feel would help.
I typically like fantasy/ urban fantasy/ horror/ romance/mystery and thriller. I can enjoy science fiction but I can't offer much in regard to scientific insight or accuracy.
If you're interested let me know :)


message 2: by Ysobel (new)

Ysobel (ysobelblack) | 7 comments I have a 75K word manuscript in a mashup of fantasy/historical/sci fi genres, if you are interested. I know that's a lot longer than your story, so to be fair, I could just send you a few chapters, if you like.

Let me know!


message 3: by Amanda (last edited Jul 17, 2018 01:06PM) (new)

Amanda | 80 comments Ysobel wrote: "I have a 75K word manuscript in a mashup of fantasy/historical/sci fi genres, if you are interested. I know that's a lot longer than your story, so to be fair, I could just send you a few chapters,..."

Hello Ysobel,
Thank you for your response! I would be happy to read over some chapters of your story. My email address is amandajustice92@yahoo.com, feel free to send them over :)


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