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Authors Seeking FREE Betas > YA fantasy, first three chapters

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message 1: by Casey (new)

Casey N | 1 comments Alisa has fallen through the looking glass but she did not end up in Wonderland. Finding herself deposited in the middle of a military coup, Alisa accidentally kills the queen, a distant successor to Snow White herself. On the run from the palace guards and being used as a pawn by the rebels, Alisa must focus on the one thing that matters the most – getting back home.

Please let know if you're interested! I'm looking for honest feedback regarding the characters and the flow of the book, as well as any other issues you've spotted in my writing.
Thank-you!


message 2: by Nichole (new)

Nichole  | 23 comments Hi, I'm interested in beta reading this :)


message 3: by Lauren (new)

Lauren van Vliet | 4 comments I'd be interested in beta reading this as well!


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