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Authors Seeking FREE Betas > 90K PNR Beta reader/superhero needed

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message 1: by Gray (new)

Gray Holborn | 17 comments Hey Y'all,

I'm mostly looking for betas willing to read in 1-chapter increments (more if you're feeling it) while I work on piecing together a new draft of a book I wrote last year. Ideally I want someone willing to give feedback on pacing or plot issues (and the ability to spot glaring and embarrassing grammatical mistakes/typos would make me like you even more).

Book Blurbage:
Odessa Black: college student, grilled cheese aficionado, best friends with an overgrown jungle-cat, and officially screwed.

In Odessa’s world, supernaturals are divided into two categories: energy feeders and energy manipulators. They exist among humans, but mostly stick to their realm in the Veil. While she has no power herself, beyond the unexplainable and seemingly useless ability to identify others who do, Odessa lives happily and chaotically with a panther-shifter and persuasion-manipulator who are perfectly fine with existing on the fringe of their world. More than happy with her outsider glimpse into the life of the Veil, Odessa wants nothing more than to hangout with her friends, finish her degree, and figure out what exactly she wants to do with the rest of her life.

But her plans are disrupted by the arrival of several new supes in town who seem hell-bent on turning everything in her life upside down. Odessa’s ties to everything she thought she knew are challenged and as she gets dragged further into the world of supes than she ever wanted to go, she discovers that the people she surrounded herself with aren’t exactly who she thought they were.

message 2: by Allie (new)

Allie Bock (alliebock) I would be interested in reading for you if you still need a beta!

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