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message 1: by Johanna (new)

Johanna Uribes | 5 comments Genre: Mystery, Thriller
Premise: a murder mystery about a serial killer
Length: 81,000 words
Title: Floater

message 2: by D (new)

D Watson | 12 comments Hi,

Could you let me have a blurb and what you hope to get from the beta reading. A time scale would also be helpful.


message 3: by Johanna (new)

Johanna Uribes | 5 comments Hi Darren,
I would just like some feedback on the basic story. Does it work? Is it an interesting premise? Any discernible plot flaws?Is it entertaining? I'm not in a super rush - any time in the next 2 or 3 weeks would be great. Here's the blurb.

by JGrace

Her life changes in an instant when Jaz Davis looks down and spots the arm of a dead woman next to the motorcycle tire. To her surprise, the man who may have done it is standing over the woman’s body. Police sirens catch her attention. When Jaz looks back he’s gone. Once she tracks him down, a magnetic pull develops between them. As more bodies show up, Jaz begins to wonder. Could this mysterious man she is drawn to like an unsolvable puzzle, be a serial killer?

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