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Murder Most Kind by James Ellis

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message 1: by James (new)

James Ellis (jame5ellis) | 2 comments Hi - I'm new to this group (but not to Goodreads) and I hope it's okay to post a piece of FF - 101 words.

https://101words.org/murder-most-kind/

Feedback gratefully accepted!


message 2: by Kenny (new)

Kenny Chaffin (kennychaffin) | 133 comments Fine as far as I know, will say that your title does not draw me in. :(


message 3: by James (new)

James Ellis (jame5ellis) | 2 comments Yes, it's always difficult balancing a title that's right for the story with one that's right to hook the reader - it's already published so too late to revisit it for the moment but maybe if I rework it into something longer - I appreciate your comment - thank you.


message 4: by Kenny (new)

Kenny Chaffin (kennychaffin) | 133 comments I misunderstood ... I thought you were posting something for critique, but is actually a publication notice/link!

Congrats!


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