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message 1: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 94 comments Hey! I'm Kriss, that’s my nickname anyway... I'm a girl, and love to read and write, perferably fantasy and urbane fantasy. I'm not currently trying to get anything published, but i really want to. I'd like to keep my age classified.
I love nature, and I find that a source of inspiration for much of what I write, I love animals especially big-cats. One day I want to be a published author.
Right now I'm working on two diffrent novels, one is called The Black Rose and is part of a trilogy, genre is an urbane fantasy, its paused on chapter three, though I have more writen, I'm editing it...
The other novel I'm working on is called Shadows of Light and is also a fantasy, its a single book in itself centered on a demon named Lumiere, the Demon of Light, I'm trying to get at least 50,000 words on it, but so far I only have 11,676.
I've also writen a few poems, and a short story (The Painted Meadow) But thats basically all.


message 2: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 94 comments Heres my writing, I could really use some feedback ^^
http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/2...


message 3: by Kevis (new)

Kevis Hendrickson (kevishendrickson) | 190 comments Hi Kriss,

I'm going to check out your writing. I'll make sure to leave some commments for you.






message 4: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 94 comments alright, thanks ^^


message 5: by I'amber (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 113 comments I LOVED it!

Shadows of light that is, I didnt read anything else ><


message 6: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 94 comments Lol, thanks, and thats the main one I'm working on write now, the rest are more things I've wrote and posted because I had nothing better to do >.< I just posted chapter fourteen a minute ago... Is there anything I should change? Or anything about its thats not very good?


message 7: by I'amber (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 113 comments Not at all.

I can't wait to see how the demons play out >:D


message 8: by I'amber (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 113 comments And I know how it is.

I'm working mainly on my fallen angel and where are you and the others, well I'm not so sure of just yet ><


message 9: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 94 comments I'amber. wrote: "And I know how it is.

I'm working mainly on my fallen angel and where are you and the others, well I'm not so sure of just yet ><"


Cool ^^ I love writing about angels and demons... That got me a little lost though, sorry, its getting late where I am...


message 10: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 94 comments I'amber. wrote: "Not at all.

I can't wait to see how the demons play out >:D"


Lol, its going to be fun to write about what happens next... Hehe.


message 11: by I'amber (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 113 comments Lmao, it's mmkay.

It's late here too; 119am.

Ah, I like writing about angels and all too [:

Mostly faries tho :D


message 12: by Kriss (last edited Aug 15, 2009 10:29PM) (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 94 comments I like farie books, but i dont know if I'd bee good at writing them... Most of what I've writen is based on shapeshifters, weres, and mainly angels and demons :)


message 13: by I'amber (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 113 comments I like to, but here lately I havn't been really holding it, like keep writing it, you know?


message 14: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 94 comments yeah. I hate it when that happens to me...


message 15: by I'amber (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 113 comments Or writers bloock, it's like UGH!


message 16: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 94 comments sorry its taken me so long to resond, my connection was being weird... I hate writers blocks, in fact I'm having one right now for one of my favorite books... it sucks.


message 17: by I'amber (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 113 comments I know how you feel, I'm that way with my fallen angel right now.

It bothers me sooo much >.<


message 18: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 94 comments I know >.< When it happens I end up getting frustrated and start writing another book, I am determaned to finish the one I'm working on now...


message 19: by I'amber (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 113 comments LMAO!

Same here!

Gawd, I just wann get donw with it tho at the same time to see ow it turns, you know?


message 20: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 94 comments Yes, thats how its like when I write most things.


message 21: by I'amber (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 113 comments Yeah, I'm not sure if it's like something most people would read, you know?

But for me it's something new, diff.

I enjy writing, I really do but URGH I just wannn get over this writers blooock!

Haha, I got a writers block for 'wrong one' and I was cleaning and it then got over it becuz while I was cleaning it just popped in my head XD


message 22: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 94 comments XD it happens like that sometimes, i wish something like that would hury up and happen to me :)


message 23: by I'amber (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 113 comments Yeah, same.

Who knows, maybe it'll happen tonight :D


message 24: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 94 comments :D Maybe... But I doubt it... at least I'm on a role with Shadows of Light.


message 25: by I'amber (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 113 comments With is always good ;D


message 26: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 94 comments :D Yep... Chapter Fifteen is going well so far.


message 27: by I'amber (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 113 comments Mmm, let me know when you get done :D


message 28: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 94 comments I just did, lol... gota post it...


message 29: by I'amber (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 113 comments Aha, okay :DDD


message 30: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 94 comments :D Just posted it, but I dont know how much I like the ending of this chapter..


message 31: by I'amber (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 113 comments Give me a few minutes mkayy?


message 32: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 94 comments alright ^^


message 33: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 94 comments I'm going to bed, night amber ^^


message 34: by I'amber (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 113 comments Sweat dreams, sorry I had to do something.

I'll read it tomorrow, I gotta go to bed too ):



message 35: by I'amber (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 113 comments Kris, sorry it took me so long to read the last up dated chapter.

I was kinda busy, and I had company so I didn't get to it to now.

Lol, but I LOVED it.

Can NOT wait to see how it plays out.

However, the first two paragraphs are the same, just thught I'd let you know :D


message 36: by Kriss (last edited Aug 16, 2009 04:39PM) (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 94 comments I'amber. wrote: "Kris, sorry it took me so long to read the last up dated chapter.

I was kinda busy, and I had company so I didn't get to it to now.

Lol, but I LOVED it.


Can NOT wait to see how it plays..."



Lol, thanks, and I fixed the chapter-thing... I didnt mean to make them repeat lol.
I'm just starting to write the next chapter, which is incedently Part Two ^^


message 37: by I'amber (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 113 comments Yeeeek!

Let me know AS SOON as you put it up.

:D



message 38: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 94 comments lol, alright :D
I can post the poem that I'm putting at the very begining if you want, it kind of tells about what happens... but not really, its more the theme of what happens, :P


message 39: by I'amber (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 113 comments If you want [:

It's up to you.

;D


message 40: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 94 comments :)
Oh great, thy storm!
Winds cast astray this falling day,
Spires sway and tumble,
The prowling beast below, no longer kept at bay,
The demons came answer, the call of darkness as it rose,
Knowing that the time was near,
The time in which the world would hear the Angel’s bitter lies,
Would hear the Demon’s rising cries.

Ombre is actually in this part of the book.


message 41: by I'amber (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 113 comments Oh my.

I love that, like really love it.

Did u wrute that or like get it and putting it on there?

Mmm, can not wait, I'm so excited just can't hide it ;D

Hhahaha!


message 42: by I'amber (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 113 comments I didn't realize you wrote the painted meadow till now ><

I loved it, I write story stories sometimes but NEVER that good at all!

I'm jelly of your writing skills.

I almost cried when I red it BTW, I fell in love with it.


message 43: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 94 comments I'amber. wrote: "Oh my.

I love that, like really love it.

Did u wrute that or like get it and putting it on there?

Mmm, can not wait, I'm so excited just can't hide it ;D

Hhahaha!"


lol, the poem is mine, I wrote it a seconed ago to fit this part of the story ^^ And btw I really like My Fallen Angel, it sounds really good so far.


message 44: by I'amber (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 113 comments I love it [:

Thanks, it's work in progess... a slowww one, but still [:

Lol.


message 45: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 94 comments I'amber. wrote: "I love it [:

Thanks, it's work in progess... a slowww one, but still [:

Lol. "

:D Everything has to start somewhere... Lol, this book started from a role play character.




message 46: by I'amber (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 113 comments Omfg!

Aha I do the same thing like I don't rp, but I will read other peoples and get s story line from it >.<

Thats where I got the idea of 'wrong one'

Aha.


message 47: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 94 comments lol... Lumiere was my own role play character... Once I got a whole book idea from a ten seconed commercial.


message 48: by Caitlan (new)

Caitlan (lionesserampant) wow whats it about


message 49: by I'amber (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 113 comments Lmao, really?

I got Wrong One because role play was about fallen angels and angels and what not and I came up with the story line [:


message 50: by Kriss (new)

Kriss (krisslee) | 94 comments Kirilee Fey Hycanth wrote: "wow whats it about"

The commercial? I dont really remember... well for that matter know... it didnt really say anything.


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