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message 1: by S (last edited May 29, 2018 09:39AM) (new)

S D Lawrie (sdlawrie) Urban Fantasy/Parallel worlds/Adventure
110K Complete
Third-person multi POV
Sex, some, but not graphic
Violence, some, but not graphic
No triggers, but that depends on your POV.
Looking for readability feedback, chapter by chapter, or as a whole. Happy to Critique on a chapter by chapter basis. Any genre.

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I've now critiqued for two authors and received nothing in return. Go somewhere else for Beta Readers, there are none on here.


message 2: by Siva (new)

Siva Kumar | 5 comments Hey S,
I'm haven't read an urban fantasy before, but I'm looking to give it a go. I can give chapter by chapter critique as I read it( Not sure how long it will take) and give you an overall feedback once I finish.

In return, could you give me, feedback on my characters for my novella( 19000 words)?

Its secondary creation, Samurai inspired fantasy. With gory fight scenes and a fair amount of swearing written in the third person limited with three pov's.

Email me if your interested :thesivakambhampati@gmail.com


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