Lesbian Romance novel

[Jessica]

Hello,

I have just finished chapter 9 of my first f/f novel. So far it's 110 pages and about halfway done.
I appreciate all kinds of feedback, but I really need someone to help me out with grammar, comma and sometimes wording.
It's not important how much experience you have, but you should be an English native because I am not. ;)

Thank you for your help.
Jessi

[Keith]

Sencha a PM.

[Michelle]

I have sent you a friend request, plus answered to you on how to contact me. Please just email me ok.

[Jessica]

Michelle wrote: "I have sent you a friend request, plus answered to you on how to contact me. Please just email me ok."

Hey Michelle, sadly I haven't got any requests or messages from you. Can you send it again? Thank you!

[Stina]

If you're still looking for beta readers, I'd be happy to beta read the completed chapters of your F/F novel. I've read many contemporary F/F romance novels, and understand the genre conventions of F/F romance.

As your beta reader, I'd provide detailed feedback regarding topics such as characterization, pacing, setting, chemistry between the romantic leads, dialogue, etc.

I'd also note any general issues that detract from the reading experience, if found (for example: many typos) and highlight aspects of the chapters that are greatly enjoyed. At this time, I'm not offering extensive proofreading/editing, but I am offering free beta reading with a detailed feedback report.

However, if things like misspellings and grammar mistakes abound, as mentioned, I will note those issues, but will do so in a general suggestion manner (provide minor editing suggestions in my detailed feedback report). I'd happily answer questions regarding my beta read feedback report, if you have questions.

If interested, please let me know via PM.

Thank you for your consideration.

[Oliwia]

I'll gladly give your work a read if you're still looking for betas! I'm both an English native and English major :)

[Solace]

are you still looking for batas?