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message 1: by Goodness (new)

Goodness Nwankpa (goodnessnwankpa) | 43 comments Hello everyone!

The first few chapters of my paranormal romance add up to 4,505 words and I am looking for feedback on it. Is it interesting? Does it catch readers' attentions.


Maxwell's been enjoying and living life, well, as well as a dead vampire can live, with his bestfriend by his side. Then Athena returns. Athena who's the reason he became a vampire. Athena who broke his dead heart 300 years ago. Maxwell's been walking around without it ever since. But now that Athena returned, she just might find it and steal it again.

message 2: by Kayla (new)

Kayla Davenport | 39 comments I'm interested! If you want to send it to me, my email is

Kayla :)

message 3: by Kelly (new)

Kelly I'd love to give it a read if you'd like. You can email it to me at

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