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message 1: by quq (new)

quq  (190511) ((This is a river that runs all around the forest, like a boundary wall. If any of the creatures of the forest pass this boundary they will turn to sparkly dust))


message 2: by Arthur (new)

Arthur Lopez (thequiettalkingkid) Cameron stood near the river, bored out of his mind and actually considering going past it.


message 3: by quq (new)

quq  (190511) Rue was in her deer form when she saw a human standing by the river. She had been coming to get some water, but now, she stopped in her tracks, frozen.


message 4: by Arthur (new)

Arthur Lopez (thequiettalkingkid) Cameron turned shaking his head, "you're not thinking straight." He saw a deer, "oh. Hello." He started to walked straight ahead away from the deer. Didn't want to see if the deer wanted to talk to him.


message 5: by quq (new)

quq  (190511) She followed him one step. She was still thirsty, and she was going to get her water. . . . unless he scared her.


message 6: by Arthur (new)

Arthur Lopez (thequiettalkingkid) Cameron looked back. The deer was closer. Maybe they did want to talk. "H-Hi. A-Are you following me?"


message 7: by quq (new)

quq  (190511) She jumped back at his voice, but didn’t shift. Or reply. She watched him with careful, wide eyes, not wanting him to move . . .


message 8: by Arthur (new)

Arthur Lopez (thequiettalkingkid) He tilted his head, "are you here for water?" He asked gently.


message 9: by quq (new)

quq  (190511) She blinked and took a slow step forwards. Carefully, ready to run at any moment.


message 10: by Arthur (new)

Arthur Lopez (thequiettalkingkid) He took a few steps back, "you're not going to hurt me right?"


message 11: by quq (last edited Apr 28, 2018 09:59AM) (new)

quq  (190511) She darted to the water and took slow, careful drinks, her eyes flicking towards him every moment.


message 12: by Arthur (new)

Arthur Lopez (thequiettalkingkid) He watched the deer drink. Strange, he thought. Maybe they just wanted to see if he was going to do something. He started walking to the river, but not close to the deer.


message 13: by quq (last edited Apr 28, 2018 10:03AM) (new)

quq  (190511) ((AHAHABAHAHAHAHhahahahaah I just realized it says ‘she farted to the water’ BAHAHAHAHA I meant to say darted))

She glanced over at him and raised her head. She just stared while he stood there.


message 14: by Arthur (new)

Arthur Lopez (thequiettalkingkid) ((Yeah, XD I saw. I was imagining an actual deer farting to the river.))


message 15: by quq (new)

quq  (190511) ((BAHAHAHA THAT IS A GOOD ONE))


message 16: by Arthur (new)

Arthur Lopez (thequiettalkingkid) ((lol yeah))


message 17: by quq (new)

quq  (190511) ((Ur turn))


message 18: by Arthur (new)

Arthur Lopez (thequiettalkingkid) He waited for the deer to do something, anything. "Are you just going t-to keep staring at m-me?"


message 19: by quq (new)

quq  (190511) She shook her head slightly and drank some more water.


message 20: by Arthur (new)

Arthur Lopez (thequiettalkingkid) He sat down and watched the deer. "You don't talk much do you?"


message 21: by quq (new)

quq  (190511) She backed away a little and watched him with careful, silent eyes.


message 22: by Arthur (new)

Arthur Lopez (thequiettalkingkid) He watched her for a while until she started to walk away, "no! I mean um, don't leave. Please."


message 23: by quq (new)

quq  (190511) She tilted her head and pranced back up to him. She scanned the ground for a good stick.


message 24: by Arthur (new)

Arthur Lopez (thequiettalkingkid) He smiled, "what are you looking for?"


message 25: by quq (new)

quq  (190511) She finally found a good sized one and picked it up with her teeth. She tossed it at him and turned around, waiting.


message 26: by Arthur (new)

Arthur Lopez (thequiettalkingkid) Cameron caught it and looked at it. He didn't know what to do with it until he saw the deer waiting for him. "Oh."


message 27: by quq (new)

quq  (190511) She shook her head, waiting for him to throw it. This was taking a while.


message 28: by Arthur (new)

Arthur Lopez (thequiettalkingkid) He threw it and laughed when the deer got it. "That's so cool." He took it and threw it again.


message 29: by quq (new)

quq  (190511) She chased after it, only watching her feet, and hit a tree headfirst. Her horns stuck in the tree and she started to panic, thrashing around and making it even worse.


message 30: by Arthur (new)

Arthur Lopez (thequiettalkingkid) "Ouch." He got up and walked to the deer. "Hey, hey. It's ok. You're going to be fine." He pet her gently. "I'm gonna get you out."


message 31: by quq (new)

quq  (190511) She couldn’t see who was petting her. She kept shaking, but she had enough sense to stop moving around. She heard a familiar voice. . .


message 32: by Arthur (new)

Arthur Lopez (thequiettalkingkid) He looked to the tree wondering how he would do this. "This might hurt a little." He tugged the horn but not hard, afraid he might her the deer. She didn't make a noise so he figured that she wasn't in pain and pulled a bit harder. The horn moved but it didn't come out.


message 33: by quq (new)

quq  (190511) Rue pulled back, trying to get her horns unstuck . . . it wasn’t working very well, and she started panting. What if she never got out of here? What if she had to shift to get out? She wouldn’t. They would get her out, she reassured herself.


message 34: by Arthur (new)

Arthur Lopez (thequiettalkingkid) He pulled harder until on horn came out, "yes!" h looked down at the deer, "um. I'm going to get the other out so calm down."


message 35: by quq (new)

quq  (190511) She followed his orders, staying quiet and still until he pulled it out. She nuzzled his hand in thanks and then darted off into the woods.

((When shall they meet again?))


message 36: by Arthur (new)

Arthur Lopez (thequiettalkingkid) ((As human?))


message 37: by quq (new)

quq  (190511) ((She almost never shifts, so she’ll be in deer form and then shift once she knows it’s him))


message 38: by Arthur (new)

Arthur Lopez (thequiettalkingkid) ((ok, so what about the next day at the same time?))


message 39: by quq (new)

quq  (190511) ((Same place?))


message 40: by Arthur (new)

Arthur Lopez (thequiettalkingkid) ((yaaa))


message 41: by quq (new)

quq  (190511) Rue tried carefully along the worn path to the stream. She came here for water, every day. Now she could see the tree where she had rammed into the bark.


message 42: by Arthur (new)

Arthur Lopez (thequiettalkingkid) Cameron was at the river again. He was once again debating whether or not to pass the river, but he was looking around too. To see if the deer was here.


message 43: by quq (new)

quq  (190511) She saw the boy, the one from yesterday, and bounced out into the clearing, waiting for him to spot her.

((Bye Lisa sadly))


message 44: by Arthur (new)

Arthur Lopez (thequiettalkingkid) ((nuuuu))

He looked around for the fiftieth time and then saw the deer jumping. He grinned, "Hey!"


message 45: by quq (new)

quq  (190511) ((One more))

She jumped a little, in happiness. She took a quick drink and then walked slowly over to him, more serious this time. Maybe she could consider shifting?


message 46: by Arthur (new)

Arthur Lopez (thequiettalkingkid) He waved, "we meet again." He was happy to see the deer even though the deer probably only wanted to play with a stick. It still felt like he made a friend.


message 47: by quq (new)

quq  (190511) She trotted over to him and laid down at his feet, twisting her neck to look up at the sky. She kind of wanted to fly, but she knew then she would probably hate him.


message 48: by Arthur (last edited Apr 29, 2018 05:03AM) (new)

Arthur Lopez (thequiettalkingkid) "Do your horns hurt?" He looked down at the deer.


message 49: by quq (new)

quq  (190511) She shook her head. She stood up again and moved away from him. She closed her wide eyes and her wings unfurled from her back, her skin turning to feathers. Her nose turned into a short beak, and her front hooves became lion’s feet, and her back legs turned into bird legs.


message 50: by Arthur (new)

Arthur Lopez (thequiettalkingkid) His eyes widened, "woah. That's so cool!" He looked at the wings. "You can fly?"


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