Ryo is approved!!With, Uta, the only things I have a problem with are the tattoo's and him working at the bar. I don't think it's legal for a ten year old to get a tattoo. I think you have to be fifteen or sixteen with parental consent. Unless he was like fourteen, and some backstreet guy who was a friend of his did it illegally. But, all you have to do for that if change the age.The same thing with the bartender. I don't think they'd let a twelve year old be a bartender anywhere. If you still want to keep that he met Ryuk walking home from work at the bar, maybe you can have that his dad owned the chain of bars or that bar (since he was rich) and he helped out around there since he was younger, and when he got a year or two older, he worked in the kitchen (if they have one), and then at 17 (or maybe even 16 if you push it) he started working as (possibly) a bartender. But, other than that, great character! He'll be approved once you fix those two things ^-^
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