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message 1: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
OMIGOSH ZAYNAH THAT IS SO DRAMATIC AND AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MORE!!!!!!


message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

THANKS YOU!!!!!!!!111


message 3: by Kamiko (new)

Kamiko (kamiko1108) | 1125 comments OH MY GOLDFISHNESS THIS IS AWESOME AND THE IDEA I LOVE IT!!!!!!


message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

thanks you guys!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

I PICTURE EVERYTHING!


message 6: by [deleted user] (new)

Holly molly you guys write a lot. I'm gonna print it all and read it tonight. :-P


message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

CHAPTER TWO COMING SOON!


message 8: by [deleted user] (new)

Whoa! Where did it go? Its not showing your story on the screen! Did you delete or is my computer acting up?


message 9: by Kamiko (new)

Kamiko (kamiko1108) | 1125 comments Mine too!


message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

sorry a small malfunction!


message 11: by [deleted user] (new)

Thats ok. I can see it now. :-P


message 12: by Kamiko (new)

Kamiko (kamiko1108) | 1125 comments Me too


message 13: by [deleted user] (new)

LOl...so what didi you guys think...never started a book with a dream before


message 14: by [deleted user] (new)

Love it so much! You are a great author!


message 15: by [deleted user] (new)

awww...thanks julane....your really like it....


message 16: by [deleted user] (new)

u didnt think the dream idea was cheesy or predictable


message 17: by [deleted user] (new)

Zaynah {❤Edward Cullen❤...❤Tobias Eaton❤...❤Magnus Bane❤ ... ❤Harry Potter❤} wrote: "u didnt think the dream idea was cheesy or predictable"

I personally think that if an author is good, they can start a book with a dream. They can making the football star go with the cheerleader. They can kill off the bad guy at the perfect moment. The situation doesn't change the cheesiness. The author does. And the way that you wrote it made me think that she actually was there. I was actually surprised that it was a dream, and that means that you did a good job. Haha, sorry for the ranting answer. :)


message 18: by [deleted user] (new)

no thanks...critisism and complimets...the 2 C's....i wnat more!!!!!!


message 19: by [deleted user] (new)

SO.....WATS UP....


message 20: by Kamiko (new)

Kamiko (kamiko1108) | 1125 comments Nothing, just typing the only boring chapter in Two Worlds(hopefully)


message 21: by [deleted user] (new)

Watching an old alien movie comedy. Its interesting. :-)


message 22: by Kamiko (new)

Kamiko (kamiko1108) | 1125 comments Cool


message 23: by [deleted user] (new)

...WATS IT CALLED...HV U CN E.T


message 24: by [deleted user] (new)

Its called Cat From Outer Space.


message 25: by Kamiko (new)

Kamiko (kamiko1108) | 1125 comments Never heard of it...


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message 27: by Kamiko (new)

Kamiko (kamiko1108) | 1125 comments Cool


message 28: by [deleted user] (new)

Yep. Its an old movie, though. Basic green screen tricks, hidden wires, easily confronted. But it was really funny.


message 29: by Kamiko (new)

Kamiko (kamiko1108) | 1125 comments Sounds like it


message 30: by [deleted user] (new)

:-)


message 31: by Kamiko (new)

Kamiko (kamiko1108) | 1125 comments :)


message 32: by [deleted user] (new)

I like the beginning, Zaynah! The dream sounds real, and it's a great way to start a story!


message 33: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Hey, Mae, I think I've seen that movie, by the sound of the title, but my computer internet connection is not working too well right now, so I'm not sure cuz I can't see the link...


message 34: by [deleted user] (new)

It was an early 90's movie.


message 35: by Ruby, Just plain Epictastic. (new)

Ruby (rubyyy) | 2486 comments Mod
Maybe I don't know...


message 36: by [deleted user] (new)

Thanks ranger girl 819. Glad you liked it


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