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message 1: by Nero (new)

Nero Seal (neroseal) | 5 comments Hi guys!
A short MM story needs some beta readers.
Under The Yew Tree
Title: "Under The Yew Tree"
Genres: Farce, Comedy, Romance, Fantasy, MM
POV details: 3d POV
Kinds of sex scenes: Steamy
Word count: 7460
BLURB:
For the heroic Sir Thomas wooing the Prince of a fairytale Kingdom is a far thornier problem than slaying dragons and rescuing damsels in distress. After persuading the King that he is a suitable beau for his only son, Sir Thomas arranges the perfect proposal setting.
Who could resist a romantic picnic in a magical meadow, underneath a Yew tree with unicorns grazing nearby?
This plan would be foolproof, if not for Sir William’s unicornophobia.
Can Sir Thomas salvage this romantic getaway and win the heart of his beloved?


message 2: by Elizabeth (new)

Elizabeth Connor (themarginatrix) | 3 comments I'm not so great with beta reading, but I can definitely help you with editing for consistency and clarity. In other words, I can help polish your work once you have something fairly substantial. Feel free to message me when you're ready for that.


message 3: by Nero (new)

Nero Seal (neroseal) | 5 comments Thank you, I'll think about it :)


message 4: by Christine (new)

Christine (thesonorista) | 3 comments I'd be happy to check it out!


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