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message 1: by Nero (last edited Mar 30, 2018 08:31AM) (new)

Nero Seal (neroseal) | 5 comments Hi guys!
A short MM story needs some beta readers.
Under The Yew Tree
Title: "Under The Yew Tree"
Genres: Farce, Comedy, Romance, Fantasy, MM
Word count: 7460
BLURB:
For the heroic Sir Thomas wooing the prince of a fairytale Kingdom is a far thornier problem than slaying dragons and rescuing damsels in distress. After persuading the king that Sir Thomas is a suitable beau for the prince, he arranges the perfect proposal setting.
Who could resist a romantic picnic in a magical meadow, underneath a Yew tree with unicorns grazing nearby?
This plan would be foolproof, if not for Sir William’s unicornophobia.
Can Sir Thomas salvage this romantic getaway and win the heart of his beloved?


message 2: by Donna (new)

Donna Hokanson | 2 comments So is Sir Thomas the beau to the king or his son? Blurb needs some work.


message 3: by Nero (new)

Nero Seal (neroseal) | 5 comments Ekk! To the Prince XD Thank you for pointing it out XD


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