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message 1: by Matthew (new)

Matthew Davenport (spazenport) | 3 comments This is an unedited work that's different than my usual style of writing. I'm looking for basic "Is it good?" feedback. Not edits, not anything else. Just if you liked it and if not what didn't you like about it.
It's called Satan's Salesman.
Summary:
Expect one HELL of a Deal!

Shane’s a damned good salesman, but when a promotion that he spent years earning gets taken away only hours after getting it, he realizes that sometimes it doesn’t matter how good you are at what you do.

But that’s not good enough for Shane.

Confronting the person that he believes is responsible for his situation, Shane learns that there’s another, quieter, sales organization that he’s competing against:

Perdition Investments.

At Perdition Investments the products are whatever you want the most, but the cost is your Soul.

Shane has a chance to use his excellent skills in an entirely new way, but at what cost? Can you lose your soul by trading people for theirs? What’s the price for success?

Shane’s about to learn that, in these contracts, the Devil is in the Details…


message 2: by Filip (new)

Filip Hi Matthew!

I'm willing to read yours to swap with mine. Mine is also a young adult/thriller. It's called Ivy.

A terrible tragedy happened to Ivy. Felix, the boy across the street soon gets involved with her vines and sets on a self-entitled task to 'fix' Ivy. However, riddled with guilt and obsession, Felix soon learns what it really means to 'fix' Ivy, which is more than he'd ever ask for....

my email is @fufezan.f@gmail.com

Thank you!


message 3: by Lily (new)

Lily Albiez | 4 comments Hi Matthew,
Your story and writing style sounds really interesting, and I'd love to beta read it.
Feel free to email me at lca.abridged@gmail.com if you're interested.
Thanks,
Lily


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