Beta Reader Group discussion

Authors Seeking FREE Betas > Short Story, 12k words, Drama/Mystery

Comments Showing 1-2 of 2 (2 new)    post a comment »
dateDown arrow    newest »

message 1: by Nick (new)

Nick Bolock (absolutenightingale) | 3 comments Hi all. I'm looking for betas for my alpha version of my short story, A Blameless Mourner.

Frank Capstone has struggled with a terrible burden for decades. A burden he swears in his heart he could have prevented himself, but has refused to confront since. He'll be forced to take action when his daughter violates a rule of their household: "No dating until you're 18." The death of his beloved sister created a hole, and now it's time for him to fill it.

message 2: by Ann (new)

Ann Everett (anneverett) | 9 comments Hi Nick,
I'd be happy to critique your short story. Send it to me in a word document at:

back to top