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message 1: by J.S. (last edited Mar 16, 2018 01:37PM) (new)

J.S. (jsedge) | 1 comments Hey guys,

I would love some feedback on my debut novel before I get started on the final edit pretty please.

Elephant Shoe is a mature (16+) YA m/m. There are scenes of a mildly sexual nature and moderate use of bad language.


If his sixteen years experience has taught Mikey Alston only one thing, it’s this:

Life is too damn cruel to face alone…

The ice took our car off the road.
The tree wrecked it.
Tate and I didn’t make it out unscathed.
My parents didn’t make it out alive…
I was eleven, and that’s the day my whole world was ripped away from me.
My brother, David, was twenty-one. All the family I had left, I needed him. He didn’t need me.
David sent me away. Packed me off far across the country from my home town in Devon – from Tate and everything I’d ever known, to live with grandparents I’d never known.
Six years is a long time.
But now I’m back.
(Not through choice. Not mine, anyway).
And Tate’s still here.
Only… he’s not the boy I left behind.
He won’t speak to me. Won’t speak to anyone.
The one upshot of my return to a life I no longer fit and he’s letting me down spectacularly.
Well, Tate, here’s the thing:
I’m not giving up on you. I’m not everybody else. You can’t shut me out. You need me – we need each other. And we will be friends again. Best friends.
I’m decided.
It’s decided.

If interested, please PM me with your email address and preferred format.

Much love,
Jo x

message 2: by Diana (new)

Diana Coombes | 43 comments Sounds good. I have just finished beta reading another story. I will send you an e-mail and if you still need someone to read it I don't mind. My story is about a woman who is in an abusive relationship and her relationship with her husband, daughter and granddaughter.

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