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message 1: by [deleted user] (new)

Post something you've written, or you like here, and we'll talk about it!


message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

very cool! I like it!


message 3: by [deleted user] (new)

Cool! So do I!


message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

I'm Human

If you cut me
I will bleed
If you hit me
I will bruise
If you shove me
I will fall
If you feed me
I will eat
If you call me
I will come
If you trust me
I will go
If you need me
I will stay
I’m human.



message 5: by Sara (new)

Sara Crabtree Hutson | 200 comments ooo...i got one..

Waking to the starry skies,
Hear the little kids start to cry,
Its not because of who has died,
But because he's taken all their pride,
Guilty nonetheless today,
All the children dont want to play,
In the dark they become agressive,
And leave their poor mother headless.


message 6: by [deleted user] (new)

wow...


message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

unique ;)


message 8: by Sara (new)

Sara Crabtree Hutson | 200 comments Britty wrote: "wow..."

forget princess_i wanna be a vampire, (Sara) wrote: "ooo...i got one..

Waking to the starry skies,
Hear the little kids start to cry,
Its not because of who has died,
But because he's taken all their pride,
Guilty nonetheless today,
All the c..."


that bad huh...darn.



message 9: by [deleted user] (new)

Ha ha Ha ha!! That's really good!! it made me LOL!!!! your quite the poet!


message 10: by Sara (new)

Sara Crabtree Hutson | 200 comments confusion..lol


message 11: by [deleted user] (new)

both of you! you have your own styles and it's great!


message 12: by Sara (new)

Sara Crabtree Hutson | 200 comments SWEET!


message 13: by [deleted user] (new)

weird, I know, laugh if you must....

Tragedy

I am a piece of gum
you chew me
then spit me out
in the street
on the floor
or underneath the desk
my taste is gone
I'm getting hard
now I'm ruined
and you don't want me anymore


message 14: by Sara (new)

Sara Crabtree Hutson | 200 comments very inspiring


message 15: by [deleted user] (new)

r u kidding??


message 16: by Sara (new)

Sara Crabtree Hutson | 200 comments nope...


message 17: by [deleted user] (new)

wow, thanks...


message 18: by [deleted user] (new)

how so?


message 19: by [deleted user] (new)

brilliant!


message 20: by [deleted user] (new)

LOL!


message 21: by [deleted user] (new)

???


message 22: by [deleted user] (new)

rrraaannndddooommm!!!!


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