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Critique Partners and Swaps > Erotic Story Critique, story development swap

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message 1: by Youredone82 (new)

Youredone82 | 4 comments Hello,

Have a 35k word story that is stalled. I am in the process of adding more elements and descriptions to some of the passion scenes, would love a partner to help with it. would be willing to read and help with your work too. I am not looking to publish, this is a personal musing.


message 2: by Keith (new)

Keith Oxenrider (mitakeet) | 1166 comments What is your goal for the story? Meaning, are you almost done, a quarter of the way, half, what? Can you provide a blurb? What sort of erotica, meaning MF, FF, MM, etc.


message 3: by Youredone82 (new)

Youredone82 | 4 comments Its mixed MF, FF , MFM , MFF. I have no goal, just want to see the story told, I started in the present and went back to tell the story, just have to get it to come full circle, no pun intended. Its loosley based on my life, its about a married couple and their lovers and the way they feed off eachothers lust. Its explicit


message 4: by Keith (new)

Keith Oxenrider (mitakeet) | 1166 comments I meant, your goal for story length. Is what you have half the story, 90%, what.


message 5: by Youredone82 (new)

Youredone82 | 4 comments id say its about 45-50%


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