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message 1: by Jesse (new)

Jesse I had to read the book seven times to make sure I got stuff right.

Its a spin off of Alice In Wonderland. It all starts off with a tea party. Now she's back and they don't know why. Alice tries to figure out why she's returned with the help of some old friends. But in this story Alice will learn that growing up is what she might have to do.


http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/1...

I hope you enjoy its the first chapter. But really its not that great I think. You can read my other stuff too. I don't mind much.



message 2: by Tia Todd (new)

Tia Todd StJohn (firedancer) I'mma read it. I am so pumped on Alice in Wonderland right now.


message 3: by Tia Todd (new)

Tia Todd StJohn (firedancer) It's interesting...but there are some words that I would revise if I were you. Some don't fit...but I like it.


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