Science Fiction, Novel Complete at 90,000 words

[Art]

Hello.
Your story line blurb fascinates me.

I'm a long-time sci-fi reader (Heinlein, Asimov, Drake, Scalzi). I am not a fan of fantasy, or quasi sci-fi (magic-and-elves).

I'm happy to read and comment on your work; if I find it uninteresting, I will stop, and will tell you (nicely) where and why I quit. It would take me two to four weeks to get through your entire book.

Because of vision problems I require an electronic medium, and prefer MS Word with Track-Changes locked on.

If you think I can be of help, let me know at arthur-dot-held-at-gmail-dot-com.

Best of luck with your writing and your book.

Best regards,
Art

PS - this is my first post, so if I've broken rules, please let me know and I'll correct them.

[Alex]

Smooth narrative flow. Really put me into an expectant mood somewhat reminiscent of Bradbury’s Martian Chronicles. This line has real potential for a narrative hook: “ the robots are breaking down.“