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Would have preferred it if the different bits were woven together a bit better.

Agreed, it would have been less jarring to switch viewpoints if some of them had been in smaller chunks. Especially since we jumped back in time with a lot of them. Weaving them in a little more would have felt smoother.
Also would have liked more of James & Christopher (James before Christopher was a bit of a selfish pretentious bore) and less of Augustus Mould. Some of his view was certainly necessary to make him more dimensional, and it was well done, but I had had quite enough of him by the time we moved on.
A lot of themes were echoed between some of the early parts and later parts with different people, and that was very well done.
Was still enjoyable, I liked Charlotte and Arthur, I liked the ending, it felt very believable.

By the end, the author glossed over too much. I do not understand how the vampires fought each other. I wanted more details about Charlotte's adventures after London - it felt like the author hand-waved away those details. At the end of the book, the Aegolius Club was simultaneously too powerful and too weak.
I loved the reveal of the Mirror Room.

Other than that I'm with Sanasai I got over Mould pretty quick and really wanted him to get his comeuppance... which like none of the villanious characters had satisfying endings, or endings at all.

I agree. Not having had a clue what I was reading, I enjoyed Christopher and James's relationship and then... that. And to then find out that it wasn't even a deliberate attempt to separate them?
I also don't see the point of being a vampire who keeps all the injuries they had when they died.

That said, I ended up enjoying the story and the world building.
I would have LOVED more of Christopher and James instead of what we got.

I was also bummed about Christopher.


Also, it is mentioned on at least 2 occasions that England has the perfect climate for vampires. Vampires who are eternally cold and crave heat so much they immerse themselves in flame to stay warm...

All that.
And did it actually mean *anything* that James was the first unwilling vampire? How much consent can children and dying people give?

I can't say I would ever read this again. Even the ending left me thinking "why, why did I bother to finish this?"

The story was exciting, but there were way too many characters and I was disappointed with the lack of romance in the second half of the book.

I felt that the beginning was really slow, but I became interested in the romance between James and Christopher, which was quickly cut short. I also felt like there just wasn't that much original vampire content. As somebody who has been reading vampire fiction for years, I found it fairly redundant.
For those of you who did enjoy it, I did read that she is writing a sequel.

There were too many characters, and the tendency to refer to them by their surname only added to the confusion for me. Several of the characters had potential to be interesting, but were barely fleshed out and then abandoned/killed off.
We all needed and deserved more James & Christopher. I wanted Adeline & Charlotte to team up and become a vampire researching/fighting duo. There were so many other more interesting or satisfying directions this book could have gone in.
Not horrible, but meh 100%.

I really wanted the Adeline-Charlotte duo too! Or even pairing. There was so much potential... only to be dashed.


Found the first half really sluggish, but the pacing got better once charlotte ran into swift and shaldwell.
And for as important as the price gang was to the fall of the club, it felt like you didnt know much about them. You were kind of just thrown into them without much introduction.
Thought the dialogue was good though. As mentioned, the 2nd half made for a quick read.
Ending was a bit predictable, but intrigued on james' whereabouts


I really liked Shadwell and Swift - they were probably my favorite characters - and we all know what happened to them. From the way it was written, I had a small hope that Swift would survive, but it was not to be.


I loved both those series

I got to page 240 (or so) and was so freaking confused by all the characters that I actually went back to the beginning and took notes as I skimmed over the parts I'd already read. Who was in the Aegolius, who was Alia, what each person does. Despite this, I liked the story, even though the pacing was weird: one part dragged, the next part zoomed past, then it dragged again.
I found myself liking James more than I thought I would. Perhaps because I'm as quiet and as apt to be unsocial as he is, and it takes a determined extrovert with a crowbar to get me out and about. So I empathized and was happy he'd found someone to love despite his shyness. (view spoiler) I admired Charlotte's courage -- and Arthur's, too -- even though I kept shaking my head over their willingness to dive back into danger. But it's understandable in both cases, and we wouldn't have a story if they were more sensible.
I liked most of the supporting characters -- the ones I was supposed to like, anyway -- and I was intrigued by their backstories. I was a bit baffled by Liza staying childlike for so long, instead of her mind developing in the child's body. (I haven't read Anne Rice, but I saw the Interview with a Vampire film once, so I remember that character. It made sense to me.) Adeline and Shadwell were brilliant, and I really wish we'd had more time with both of them, both on their backgrounds and the time Charlotte and Arthur spend with them. (view spoiler)
I noticed that there were green owls in the nursery at Charlotte and James's childhood home, and then green owls grace the cards from the Aegolius Club. I briefly wondered if that was a deliberate choice on their father's part, because it was a far less subtle hint than James being locked in the closet/priest hole (thanks, Kiala). But I couldn't think of any reason for that, so I'll chalk it up to a coincidence in the universe of the book and blatant foreshadowing on the author's part. I definitely think Mr Norbury Senior was looking to join the Aegolius, however. I reread the scene where Charlotte sees him after I finished the book, and it's all there. I'm not convinced he died of the Exchange; maybe he'll show up in the sequel, like Bootstrap Bill Turner in the Pirates of the Caribbean movies.
All in all, a good book, especially for a first novel. I may read it again at some point so I can absorb more details that I didn't notice this first time, but I can't renew this copy again, so it has to go back to the library.
P.S. Thank you, Bonnie, for calling Brideshead Revisited "Brokeback Oxford." I will refer to it as "Brokeback Oxford" from now on.